Did I do this right?

[egyptian]

Okay, I've never made a Hero character before and I thought I'd throw this up here to see what I did wrong :)

Doctor X

The latest man to wear the identity of Doctor X, surgeon Miles Davis (no relation) has taken up the super-scientific weaponry of the X Society to fight crime and the forces of evil!

STR 15
DEX 20
CON 15
BODY 15
INT 20
EGO 18
PRE 15
COM 10

PD 3
ED 3
SPD 3
REC 6
END 30
STUN 30

Powers:

Ultraviolet Blaster (Energy Blast-8d6 dmg, No Knockback, Beam, Penetrating, Charges (8 shots, 2 clips), OAF)=30 pts.

Paravision Goggles (Enhanced Senses-Detect: Nightvision, Infra-Red Perception, +8 to rolls for Sight group, Microscopic (10x magnification), OAF)=18 pts.

Force Field Belt (Multipower 35 point reserve)=42 pts.
Slot 1: Force Field (15 PD/15 ED, OIF, Reduced Endurance, PLUS HKA (1d6), Continuous, Damage Shield, Linked, OIF)
Slot 2: Force Wall (7 PD/7 ED, Reduced Endurance, OIF)

Phase-Shift Watch (Desolidification, OIF, Charges (4, Continuing (1 turn))=20 pts.

Skills/Perks/Talents:

Analyze 15+
Inventor 15+
Conversation 12+
High Society 12+
Language-Latin (3pt)
Paramedics 16+
SS: Medicine 16+
Knowledge: X Society 15+
SS: Pharmacology 15+
SS: Surgery 16+
Streetwise 12+
Bureaucratics 12+
TF: Common Vehicles 8+
Weaponsmith 15+
License to Practice Medicine
Well Off (100k/year)

Disadvantages:

Distinctive Features-X Society Tattoo (Easy To Conceal)=5 pts.
Hunted-La Cosa Nostra (As Strong, Occasional, Harshly Punish)=10 pts.
Physical Limitation-Diabetes (Frequent, Greatly Affects)=15pts.
Phychological Limitation-Code Against Killing (Common, Strong)=15 pts.
Total points=200 pts.

If you've gotten this far you're extraordinarily patient. Any thoughts, comments, advice, chastisement and blatherskite are all very welcome. Thank you and good knight.

[wcw43921]

Good Job as far as I can tell--I'm guessing he's a Golden Age/Pulp Age character?

You might wish to give him the Deduction skill at 15+; it's among the most useful skills a character can have--it gets the player the answer when he's stumped, and that helps keep the plot moving along.

Also, you might want to take a look at the Normal Characteristic Maxima Disadvantage, either to use for more points or to swap out one of the other Disadvantages. It certainly look like he qualifies for it.

Other than that, he looks alright to me. BE A HERO!

[pinecone]

I always recomend for pulp style crime fighters Well connected and at least 5 contacts (Police comish,mayor,X society etc...)Other than that Looking good....