Tonio
Oct 31st, '07, 11:48 AM
Comments, please? What's overboard, what's underpowered, what's missing? (This is for a Galactic-type campaign... same one for which I've posted a coupla other characters.)
Note: the inflict pain and pleasure powers should've been continuous... but I hadda shave points somewhere. :(
Note: GM has approved the END Battery in the EC, no need to point it out. =) Also, all the powers with Focus draw from the battery, the rest from personal END.
Link to character sheet:
http://www.mythosys.com/hero/yttrank.html
If you'd rather see just the text, here on the boards:
Yttrank
Val Char Cost Roll Notes
15 STR 5 12- Lift 200.0kg; 3d6 [1]
23 DEX 39 14- OCV: 8/DCV: 8
20 CON 20 13-
15 BODY 10 12-
13 INT 3 12- PER Roll 12-
30 EGO 40 15- ECV: 10
30 PRE 20 15- PRE Attack: 6d6
10 COM 0 11-
3/28 PD 0 Total: 3/28 PD (0/25 rPD)
4/29 ED 0 Total: 4/29 ED (0/25 rED)
5 SPD 17 Phases: 3, 5, 8, 10, 12
16 REC 18
56 END 8
72 STUN 39 Total Characteristic Cost: 219
Movement:
Running: 6"/12"
Flight: 28"/56"
Leaping: 3"/6"
Swimming: 2"/4"
Cost Powers END
15 Mental Defense (46 points total)
9 Invisibility to Sight, Hearing, Mental, Smell/Taste and Touch Groups, Spatial Awareness and Detect (48 Active Points); Increased Endurance Cost (x10 END; -4), IIF (Phase Generator; -1/4), Bright Fringe (-1/4) 50
9 Life Support (Safe in High Radiation; Safe in Intense Cold; Safe in Low Pressure/Vacuum; Self-Contained Breathing) (16 Active Points); Costs Endurance (-1/2), IIF (Phase Generator; -1/4) 2
56 Gadgets: Elemental Control, 112-point powers
28 1) Blaster: Energy Blast 15d6, Reduced Endurance (0 END; +1/2) (112 Active Points); OAF (Blaster Pistol; -1)
37 2) Phase Shield: Force Field (25 PD/25 ED/25 Mental Defense/25 Power Defense/12 Flash Defense: Sight Group) (112 Active Points); OIF (Phase Generator; -1/2) 11
37 3) Gravbelt: Flight 28", Invisible Power Effects (Fully Invisible; +1) (112 Active Points); OIF (Gravbelt; -1/2) 11
45 4) Dark Matter Battery: Endurance Reserve (620 END, 50 REC) (112 Active Points); IIF (Battery; -1/4)
100 Pain and Pleasure: Multipower, 100-point reserve
7u 1) Inflict Pleasure: Entangle 4d6, 4 DEF, Takes No Damage From Attacks Limited Group (Physical Attacks; +1/4), Works Against EGO, Not STR (+1/4), Based On EGO Combat Value (Mental Defense applies; +1) (100 Active Points); Cannot Form Barriers (-1/4), Linked (Addicted to Pleasure; -1/4) 10
10u 2) Inflict Pain: Ego Attack 9d6 (Alien and Human classes of minds) (100 Active Points) 10
9 Addicted to Pleasure: Minor Transform 0 1/2d6 (Sentient Being into Sentient Being Addicted to Pleasure), Works against EGO, not BODY (+1/4), Reduced Endurance (0 END; +1/2), Penetrating (+1/2), Based On EGO Combat Value (Standard Defenses apply; +1) (16 Active Points); Linked (Inflict Pleasure; -1/2), Limited Target ([Slightly Limited]; Sentient Beings; -1/4)
Talents
5 Eidetic Memory
Skills
5 Blaster Mastery: +5 with any single attack with one specific weapon
3 Interrogation 15-
3 Oratory 15-
3 Persuasion 15-
Total Powers & Skill Cost: 381
Total Cost: 600
450+ Disadvantages
20 Psychological Limitation: Absolutely Protective of Humans (Common, Total)
20 Enraged: Humans are harmed (Uncommon), go 14-, recover 11-
10 Psychological Limitation: Hostile towards nonhumans (Uncommon, Strong)
15 Social Limitation: Extremely Condescending and Arrogant (Very Frequently, Minor)
10 Distinctive Features: Very pale skin, pale gray eyes, bald, odd speech (Concealable; Noticed and Recognizable; Detectable By Commonly-Used Senses)
20 Dependent NPC: Various Phlox slaves 8- (Normal; Useful Noncombat Position or Skills; Group DNPC: x8 DNPCs)
10 Psychological Limitation: Dependent on Slaves (Common, Moderate)
Notes: Yttrank is used to having his slaves do everyday actions for him, like opening doors, fetching things, etc., so it takes him a little effort to do these himself.
10 Hunted: Other Khybraxi 8- (As Pow, Harshly Punish)
20 Vulnerability: 2 x Effect Physical Entangles (Common)
10 Vulnerability: 2 x STUN Radiation Attacks (Uncommon)
5 Vulnerability: 1 1/2 x BODY Radiation Attacks (Uncommon)
Total Disadvantage Points: 600
Background/History: Yttrank is a member of the Khybrax race, an ancient race of very powerful beings which enslaved a highly technologically advanced race, the Phlox, using Pavlovian techniques. The Khybraxi believe themselves to be the ancestors of humanity; they are fanatically protective of humans for this reason. Many Khybraxi believe they are the ultimate protector, though, so they continually fight, seeing the others as threats to the human race. Yttrank recently came to Earth to establish his territory, a move seen as dangerous by many Khybraxi.
Personality/Motivation: Yttrank is very arrogant and condescending, believing himself to be vastly superior to humans. Nonetheless, he is, as are all Khybraxi, zealously protective of humans. No Khybraxi will allow a human to be harmed at any cost. If unable to protect a human, a Khybraxi will go into a wild rage.
Quote: "Beware, humanx [humans]... you are in danger here. Go find xelter [shelter], you are no match for thix [this] threat. I will protect you."
Powers/Tactics: Yttrank usually relies on his Blaster pistol and Phase Shield for normal combat. Against particularly well-armored opponents, he'll attempt to inflict pain and therefore dominate them. If forced into combat with humans, he'll inflict pleasure to hold them at bay while he escapes.
Campaign Use:
Appearance: Yttrank appears to be a regular human, except for being completely bald and having very pale skin and pale gray eyes. He is usually seen with his blaster in hand.
Note: the inflict pain and pleasure powers should've been continuous... but I hadda shave points somewhere. :(
Note: GM has approved the END Battery in the EC, no need to point it out. =) Also, all the powers with Focus draw from the battery, the rest from personal END.
Link to character sheet:
http://www.mythosys.com/hero/yttrank.html
If you'd rather see just the text, here on the boards:
Yttrank
Val Char Cost Roll Notes
15 STR 5 12- Lift 200.0kg; 3d6 [1]
23 DEX 39 14- OCV: 8/DCV: 8
20 CON 20 13-
15 BODY 10 12-
13 INT 3 12- PER Roll 12-
30 EGO 40 15- ECV: 10
30 PRE 20 15- PRE Attack: 6d6
10 COM 0 11-
3/28 PD 0 Total: 3/28 PD (0/25 rPD)
4/29 ED 0 Total: 4/29 ED (0/25 rED)
5 SPD 17 Phases: 3, 5, 8, 10, 12
16 REC 18
56 END 8
72 STUN 39 Total Characteristic Cost: 219
Movement:
Running: 6"/12"
Flight: 28"/56"
Leaping: 3"/6"
Swimming: 2"/4"
Cost Powers END
15 Mental Defense (46 points total)
9 Invisibility to Sight, Hearing, Mental, Smell/Taste and Touch Groups, Spatial Awareness and Detect (48 Active Points); Increased Endurance Cost (x10 END; -4), IIF (Phase Generator; -1/4), Bright Fringe (-1/4) 50
9 Life Support (Safe in High Radiation; Safe in Intense Cold; Safe in Low Pressure/Vacuum; Self-Contained Breathing) (16 Active Points); Costs Endurance (-1/2), IIF (Phase Generator; -1/4) 2
56 Gadgets: Elemental Control, 112-point powers
28 1) Blaster: Energy Blast 15d6, Reduced Endurance (0 END; +1/2) (112 Active Points); OAF (Blaster Pistol; -1)
37 2) Phase Shield: Force Field (25 PD/25 ED/25 Mental Defense/25 Power Defense/12 Flash Defense: Sight Group) (112 Active Points); OIF (Phase Generator; -1/2) 11
37 3) Gravbelt: Flight 28", Invisible Power Effects (Fully Invisible; +1) (112 Active Points); OIF (Gravbelt; -1/2) 11
45 4) Dark Matter Battery: Endurance Reserve (620 END, 50 REC) (112 Active Points); IIF (Battery; -1/4)
100 Pain and Pleasure: Multipower, 100-point reserve
7u 1) Inflict Pleasure: Entangle 4d6, 4 DEF, Takes No Damage From Attacks Limited Group (Physical Attacks; +1/4), Works Against EGO, Not STR (+1/4), Based On EGO Combat Value (Mental Defense applies; +1) (100 Active Points); Cannot Form Barriers (-1/4), Linked (Addicted to Pleasure; -1/4) 10
10u 2) Inflict Pain: Ego Attack 9d6 (Alien and Human classes of minds) (100 Active Points) 10
9 Addicted to Pleasure: Minor Transform 0 1/2d6 (Sentient Being into Sentient Being Addicted to Pleasure), Works against EGO, not BODY (+1/4), Reduced Endurance (0 END; +1/2), Penetrating (+1/2), Based On EGO Combat Value (Standard Defenses apply; +1) (16 Active Points); Linked (Inflict Pleasure; -1/2), Limited Target ([Slightly Limited]; Sentient Beings; -1/4)
Talents
5 Eidetic Memory
Skills
5 Blaster Mastery: +5 with any single attack with one specific weapon
3 Interrogation 15-
3 Oratory 15-
3 Persuasion 15-
Total Powers & Skill Cost: 381
Total Cost: 600
450+ Disadvantages
20 Psychological Limitation: Absolutely Protective of Humans (Common, Total)
20 Enraged: Humans are harmed (Uncommon), go 14-, recover 11-
10 Psychological Limitation: Hostile towards nonhumans (Uncommon, Strong)
15 Social Limitation: Extremely Condescending and Arrogant (Very Frequently, Minor)
10 Distinctive Features: Very pale skin, pale gray eyes, bald, odd speech (Concealable; Noticed and Recognizable; Detectable By Commonly-Used Senses)
20 Dependent NPC: Various Phlox slaves 8- (Normal; Useful Noncombat Position or Skills; Group DNPC: x8 DNPCs)
10 Psychological Limitation: Dependent on Slaves (Common, Moderate)
Notes: Yttrank is used to having his slaves do everyday actions for him, like opening doors, fetching things, etc., so it takes him a little effort to do these himself.
10 Hunted: Other Khybraxi 8- (As Pow, Harshly Punish)
20 Vulnerability: 2 x Effect Physical Entangles (Common)
10 Vulnerability: 2 x STUN Radiation Attacks (Uncommon)
5 Vulnerability: 1 1/2 x BODY Radiation Attacks (Uncommon)
Total Disadvantage Points: 600
Background/History: Yttrank is a member of the Khybrax race, an ancient race of very powerful beings which enslaved a highly technologically advanced race, the Phlox, using Pavlovian techniques. The Khybraxi believe themselves to be the ancestors of humanity; they are fanatically protective of humans for this reason. Many Khybraxi believe they are the ultimate protector, though, so they continually fight, seeing the others as threats to the human race. Yttrank recently came to Earth to establish his territory, a move seen as dangerous by many Khybraxi.
Personality/Motivation: Yttrank is very arrogant and condescending, believing himself to be vastly superior to humans. Nonetheless, he is, as are all Khybraxi, zealously protective of humans. No Khybraxi will allow a human to be harmed at any cost. If unable to protect a human, a Khybraxi will go into a wild rage.
Quote: "Beware, humanx [humans]... you are in danger here. Go find xelter [shelter], you are no match for thix [this] threat. I will protect you."
Powers/Tactics: Yttrank usually relies on his Blaster pistol and Phase Shield for normal combat. Against particularly well-armored opponents, he'll attempt to inflict pain and therefore dominate them. If forced into combat with humans, he'll inflict pleasure to hold them at bay while he escapes.
Campaign Use:
Appearance: Yttrank appears to be a regular human, except for being completely bald and having very pale skin and pale gray eyes. He is usually seen with his blaster in hand.