This is the Universe in which I am about to run. Comments welcome.

[Seenar]

Kith Dalton

http://www.seenar.com/games/kith_dalton/index.html

Edit-maybe this will help

[keithcurtis]

Sorry, getting nothing but 404's

Keith ":confused: " Curtis

[James Gillen]

I'm getting a bunch of '404' errors on your links, dude.

JG

[Blue]

Copying a link, pasting it into the URL window and deleting one of the "Kith Dalton"s will get you a valid URL.

[tkdguy]

Looks pretty good so far. Have you made a package deal for the Order of St. Anne?

[Seenar]

Originally posted by tkdguy
Looks pretty good so far. Have you made a package deal for the Order of St. Anne?

I have sort of. The idea came from one of the new players, so her character has it. There is a Blessing Collage that goes along with it as well, and you have to buy at elast 15 points in marital arts.

The link works for me, I am not sure what the deal is, but I will edit to repair.

[Worldmaker]

Looks well researched and consistent. Nicely done. I agree that a package for the Order of SaInt Anne's probably a good idea.

[Seenar]

I will see what I can do to get it off paper and into HTMl :)

[joen00b]

Good stuff! In depth enough to give the players a good feel for the world, but not defined enough so they can make their own history in the world.

Great documentation and notes on how everything is. Rather organized:)

[tkdguy]

If I may make a suggestion, I suggest using Aikido, Tai Chi Ch'uan, or another internal art for the Order. These arts focus on submission and redirection, making them more merciful (for lack of a bettter word) than other arts, but still capable of dealing damage when necessary. You can always westernize the names if you desire. A Code Against Killing also seems to be in order here...

Just my 2 cents.

[C_Zeree]

You turned the world on its side, and set the Scandinavian countries floating off by their lonesome. How dare you! ;)

Now all the Sweedish are going to get wet going to Moscow. :D

Seriously.
Looks intricate, thought out. You should have no problem developing adventures in this relm. Compliments.

[Seenar]

Originally posted by tkdguy
If I may make a suggestion, I suggest using Aikido, Tai Chi Ch'uan, or another internal art for the Order. These arts focus on submission and redirection, making them more merciful (for lack of a bettter word) than other arts, but still capable of dealing damage when necessary. You can always westernize the names if you desire. A Code Against Killing also seems to be in order here...

Just my 2 cents.

Yeah, we headed it in that direction. They do have a CAK along with the POI limitations (pretty much fills them up) as well as a pretty hefty Social Limitation.

In fact, the Order of Saint Anne was a player idea I fleshed out. I was not intending them to even exisit, but I like to take player ideas and work them in if I can.

[Seenar]

Originally posted by joen00b
Good stuff! In depth enough to give the players a good feel for the world, but not defined enough so they can make their own history in the world.

Great documentation and notes on how everything is. Rather organized:)

This is typically how I make a world. This is just the first time I have done it all on the computer.

[Seenar]

Update to Order of St. Anne as requested:
http://www.seenar.com/games/kith_dalton/Order_of_St_Anne.htm

[tkdguy]

Crunchy bits. I like!