Gnoll (1st Draft):
I'd like to improve my write-up for Gnolls (7.5' Tall Hyena Humanoids).
Does anyone have any suggestions or would like to compare their own versions here?
<font size=+2><b>Gnoll</b></font><b> (Standard 100 Point Warrior)</b>
<table cellpadding="0" border="0"><tr><td align="right"><font size=2><b>Val </b></font></td><td><font size=2><b>Char </b></font></td><td><font size=2><b>Cost</b></font></td></tr><tr><td align="right"><font size=2>20 </font></td><td><font size=2><b>STR</b></font></td><td><font size=2>10</font></td></tr><tr><td align="right"><font size=2>10 </font></td><td><font size=2><b>DEX</b></font></td><td><font size=2>0</font></td></tr><tr><td align="right"><font size=2>15 </font></td><td><font size=2><b>CON</b></font></td><td><font size=2>10</font></td></tr><tr><td align="right"><font size=2>13 </font></td><td><font size=2><b>BODY</b></font></td><td><font size=2>6</font></td></tr><tr><td align="right"><font size=2>8 </font></td><td><font size=2><b>INT</b></font></td><td><font size=2>-2</font></td></tr><tr><td align="right"><font size=2>10 </font></td><td><font size=2><b>EGO</b></font></td><td><font size=2>0</font></td></tr><tr><td align="right"><font size=2>8/15 </font></td><td><font size=2><b>PRE</b></font></td><td><font size=2>-2</font></td></tr><tr><td align="right"><font size=2>8 </font></td><td><font size=2><b>COM</b></font></td><td><font size=2>-1</font></td></tr><tr><td><font size=2></font></td><td><font size=2> </font></td><td><font size=2></font></td></tr><tr><td align="right"><font size=2>6 </font></td><td><font size=2><b>PD</b></font></td><td><font size=2>2</font></td></tr><tr><td align="right"><font size=2>5 </font></td><td><font size=2><b>ED</b></font></td><td><font size=2>2</font></td></tr><tr><td align="right"><font size=2>2 </font></td><td><font size=2><b>SPD</b></font></td><td><font size=2>0</font></td></tr><tr><td align="right"><font size=2>8 </font></td><td><font size=2><b>REC</b></font></td><td><font size=2>2</font></td></tr><tr><td align="right"><font size=2>30 </font></td><td><font size=2><b>END</b></font></td><td><font size=2>0</font></td></tr><tr><td align="right"><font size=2>36 </font></td><td><font size=2><b>STUN</b></font></td><td><font size=2>5</font></td></tr><td><font size=2></font></td><td><font size=2> </font></td><td><font size=2></font></td></tr><tr><td align="right"><font size=2>7" </font></td><td><font size=2><b>RUN</b></font></td><td><font size=2>2</font></td></tr><tr><td align="right"><font size=2>2" </font></td><td><font size=2><b>SWIM</b></font></td><td><font size=2>0</font></td></tr><tr><td align="right"><font size=2>4" </font></td><td><font size=2><b>LEAP</b></font></td><td><font size=2>0</font></td></tr></table><b>Characteristics Cost:</b> 34
<table border="0" cellpadding="0"><tr><td align="right"><b>Cost </b></td><td><b>Power</b></td><td align="right"><b>END</b></td></tr><tr><td align="right" valign="top">2 </td><td><b><i>Thick Fur/Tough Skin: </i></b>Damage Resistance (2 PD/2 ED) </td><td valign="top" align="right"></td></tr><tr><td align="right" valign="top">15 </td><td><b><i>Fangs: </i></b>Killing Attack - Hand-To-Hand 1/2d6 (1d6+1 w/STR), Reduced Endurance (0 END; +1/2) (15 Active Points) </td><td valign="top" align="right"></td></tr><tr><td align="right" valign="top">2 </td><td>+2 PER with Normal Smell </td><td valign="top" align="right"></td></tr><tr><td align="right" valign="top">5 </td><td>Discriminatory with Normal Smell </td><td valign="top" align="right"></td></tr><tr><td align="right" valign="top">5 </td><td>Tracking with Normal Smell </td><td valign="top" align="right"></td></tr><tr><td align="right" valign="top">2 </td><td>+2 PER with Normal Hearing </td><td valign="top" align="right"></td></tr><tr><td align="right" valign="top">3 </td><td>Ultrasonic Perception (Hearing Group) </td><td valign="top" align="right"></td></tr><tr><td align="right" valign="top">5 </td><td>Infrared Perception (Sight Group) </td><td valign="top" align="right"></td></tr><tr><td align="right" valign="top">3 </td><td><b><i>Scary: </i></b>+7 PRE (7 Active Points); Limited Power (Only for PRE Attacks) (-1) </td><td valign="top" align="right"></td></tr><tr><td align="right" valign="top">2 </td><td><b><i>Large (7.5' Tall): </i></b>Knockback Resistance -1" </td><td valign="top" align="right"></td></tr></table><b>Powers Cost:</b> 44
<table cellpadding="0" border="0"><tr><td align="right"><b>Cost </b></td><td><b>Skill</b></td></tr><tr><td valign="top" align="right">8 </td><td>+1 with All Combat </td></tr><tr><td valign="top" align="right">4 </td><td>WF: Common Melee Weapons, Common Missile Weapons </td></tr><tr><td valign="top" align="right">0 </td><td>Language: Gnoll (idiomatic) (4 Active Points) </td></tr><tr><td valign="top" align="right">1 </td><td>Language: Orc or Hobgoblin (basic conversation) </td></tr><tr><td valign="top" align="right">1 </td><td>Language: Troll (basic conversation) </td></tr><tr><td valign="top" align="right">1 </td><td>Mimicry 8- </td></tr><tr><td valign="top" align="right">2 </td><td>PS: Warrior/Hunter/Predator/Scavenger 11- </td></tr><tr><td valign="top" align="right">2 </td><td>Survival 11- </td></tr><tr><td valign="top" align="right">3 </td><td>Tracking 11- </td></tr></table><b>Skills Cost: </b>22
<table cellpadding="0" border="0"><tr><td align="right"><b>Val </b></td><td><b>Disadvantages</b></td></tr><tr><td valign="top" align="right">5 </td><td>Distinctive Features (and Social Limitation)- Gnoll: (Easily Concealed; Noticed and Recognizable; Detectable By Commonly-Used Senses) </td></tr><tr><td valign="top" align="right">20 </td><td>Normal Gnoll Characteristic Maxima </td></tr><tr><td valign="top" align="right">5 </td><td>Physical Limitation - Short-Lived (~35 Years): (Infrequently, Slightly Impairing) </td></tr><tr><td valign="top" align="right">5 </td><td>Psychological Limitation - Hatred of Felines and Canines: (Uncommon, Moderate) </td></tr><tr><td valign="top" align="right">5 </td><td>Psychological Limitation - Lazy (Dislike Physical Work): (Uncommon, Moderate) </td></tr><tr><td valign="top" align="right">5 </td><td>Psychological Limitation: Dislike Bright Light (Uncommon, Moderate) </td></tr><tr><td valign="top" align="right">5 </td><td>Reputation: coward, scavenger, lazy, bully, slaver, demon-worshipper, 8- </td></tr></table>
<b>Disadvantage Points:</b> 50
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<b>Base Points:</b> 50
<b>Experience Required:</b> 0
<b>Total Experience Available:</b> 0
<b>Experience Unspent:</b> 0
<b>Total Character Cost:</b> 100
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<table width="100%" valign="top"><tr valign="top"><td><b>Height: </b>2.29 m</td><td><b>Hair: </b>Reddish-Yellow</td></tr><tr valign="top"><td><b>Weight: </b>160.00 kg</td><td><b>Eyes: </b>Green</td></tr><tr valign="top"><span style="font-family: Arial Narrow; font-weight: 700"><td colspan=2><b>Appearance: </b>A typical Gnoll is 7.5' tall weighing around 350 lbs.<br><br>Gnoll fur is most often spotted Reddish-Yellow but may be striped or brown as well.</td></tr><tr valign="top"><td colspan=2><b>Personality: </b>Hunt and Kill</td></tr><tr valign="top"><td colspan=2><b>Quote:</b></td></tr><tr valign="top"><td colspan=2><b>Background: </b>Often mistaken for Dog-Humanoids, Gnolls are actually Hyena-Humanoids. <br><br>Gnolls are ferocious humanoids of low intelligence. They resemble a cross between a human and a hyena. They live in rough, rugged wasteland and wilderness areas. Gnolls may use all weapons, but most do not work metal; they steal most of their metal weapons from humans. They are strong, but dislike work and prefer to bully and steal (D&D Rules Cyclopedia p.180).<br><br>Gnolls are large, evil, hyena-like humanoids that roam about in loosely organized bands. While the body of a gnoll is shaped like that of a large human, the details are those of a hyena. They stand erect on two legs and have hands that can manipulate as well as those of any human. They have greenish gray skin, darker near the muzzle, with a short reddish gray to dull yellow mane. (2e-MM)<br><br>- Can actually eat and digest bone<br><br>Sources:<br>- DD-RC.180; 1e-MM.46; 2e-MM.158; 3e-MM.105-106; HM-HoB.v?.??.<br> - "Gnolls, those Dog-Faced Killers" ( http://www.wizards.com/default.asp?x=books/fr/gnolls )<br> - http://www.callofthenightwalker.com/gnoll.htm<br> - http://www.korinth.com/3eKorinthCont...es/gnoll.shtml<br>- Hero: Gnolls are Hyena-Humanoids and while Hyenas are neither dogs nor cats, the write-ups on "Erqigdlit" MMM.38 and "Pakasa" MMM.80 still are useful points of comparison for animal-based humanoids.<br>- Buffy the Vampire Slayer: "The Pack" (Season 1, Episode 6) where Xander and some bullies get possessed by Hyenas.<br>- Hyenas: <br> - "The Hyena Pages" ( http://www.liberalmafia.org/hyenas/ )<br> - http://www.lioncrusher.com/family.asp?family=Hyaenidae<br> - http://sailfish.exis.net/~spook/hyenatxt.html</td></tr><tr valign="top"><td colspan=2><b>Powers/Tactics: </b>Prey on the Weak, Taunt and Tease, Lure and Ambush</td></tr><tr valign="top"><td colspan=2><b>Campaign Use: </b>Standard NPC Monster humanoid: bigger than an Orc or even Hobgoblin, slightly smaller than a Bugbear or Ogre. When you want the characters hunted by an unruly Pack.</td></tr></table>

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