Tightening the prose would probably cut their length by about 10%. I think thats about all you could do without gutting them. On the other hand, the organization of the current version struck me as counter-intuitive. It makes sense after you work with it for a while, but out of the starting gate its a bit disorienting.




) how to build new Powers, Talents, Advantages, Limitations, and Disadvantages. The combat system would be expanded, and different methods of combat (dogfighting, "social combat", etc) explored. There would be an expanded list of equipment. Finally, there would be the full section on running a campaign, and several sample campaigns.

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