help with character

[Kefrem]

im having a heck of a time tweaking this flying/energy/brick down to the 350 point base...can a few of you folks give me a hand?

 

Pharoah

 

Player: S.W.S.

 

Val	Char	Cost
30	STR	0
15	DEX	15
15	CON	10
13	BODY	6
16	INT	6
11	EGO	2
18	PRE	8
13	COM	2
7/27	PD	7
7/27	ED	4
7	SPD	45
7	REC	8
30	END	0
100	STUN	79

6" RUN02" SWIM06" LEAP0Characteristics Cost: 192

 

Cost	Power	END
4	+4 Mental Defense (6 points total)
48	Glowing power of Seker: Armor (20 PD / 20 ED) (60 Active Points); Visible (-1/4) (added to Secondary Value)
25	Mana of Seker: Endurance Reserve(Only in sunlight) (150 END, 20 REC) Reserve: (35 Active Points) REC: (20 Active Points); Limited Recovery (-1)
36	Gift of Seker's light: Flight 12", Reduced Endurance (0 END; +1/2) (36 Active Points)
10	+20 STR (20 Active Points); No Figured Characteristics (-1/2) (uses END Reserve) (Modifiers affect Base Characteristic) (added to Primary Value)	2
60	Godlike powers: Multipower, 60-point reserve
1u	1) Become living light: Teleportation 1", Megascale (1" = 100000 km; +1 1/2), Can Be Scaled Down: 1" = 1km (+1/4) (5 Active Points) (uses END Reserve)	1
6u	2) Healing touch of Seker: Healing 3 1/2d6 (max. Healed Points: 21) (Can Heal Limbs, Resurrection) (60 Active Points) (uses END Reserve)	6
1u	3) Seker's dazzling burst: Sight Group Images, x2" Radius (+1/4) (12 Active Points) (uses END Reserve)	1
5u	4) Burst of searing light: Flash 10d6 (Sight Group) (50 Active Points) (uses END Reserve)	5
4u	5) Smiting light of Seker: Killing Attack - Ranged 3d6 (vs. ED) (45 Active Points); No Knockback (-1/4) (uses END Reserve)	4
5u	6) Solar blast: Energy Blast 12d6 (vs. ED) (60 Active Points); No Knockback (-1/4) (uses END Reserve)	6

Powers Cost: 205

 

 

Cost	Skill
7	AK: Egypt 16-
3	Language: Afrikaans: Fluent Conversation (Literacy)
3	Language: Heiroglyphics: Fluent Conversation (Literacy)
8	PS: Archaeologist (INT-based) 17-
3	Teamwork 12-
2	WF: Clubs, Handguns, Staffs, Unarmed Combat
8	SS: Archaeology (INT-based) 17-

Skills Cost: 34

 

 

Cost	Talent
5	Lightning Reflexes: +3 DEX to act first with All Actions

Talents Cost: 5

 

 

Total Character Cost: 435

 

 

Base Points: 200

Experience Required: 235

Total Experience Available: 0

Experience Unspent: 0

[Monolith]

Well start by chopping of 2 points of Speed (too much for a 15 DEX character) and 40 points of STUN (way too much for a starting-level character).

 

I would chop 50 points off the END Reserve and 5 points off the ER Recovery.

 

I would make the Flight full END or half, not zero.

 

I would probably lower the Multipower to 50 points and then adjust each of the slots.

 

That right there would save you around 75 points.

[JohnathanChance]

Well, one of the first things I see would be maybe drop your speed down by a point or two, also why do you need such a large end battery? the most end you would conceivably use in one turn would be 42, of which you would get back 20 every post twelve so maybe reduce that a bit. Also you spent an awful lot on your STUN. Those look to be the best places to shave some points.

[GradonSilverton]

I'll 3rd the Speed cut.....remember a flying Energy Brick...not a Flying Speedster Energy Brick.

[Chris Goodwin]

I'd question why you're buying up your REC, with 100 STUN and an END Reserve. I'd do away with No Figured Characteristics on your STR. That's saved you maybe 6 points, and cost you (lessee...carry the 1...) 29 points that you've put into the figured characteristics the 30 STR would give you. I'd bump up CON a bit as well, perhaps to 28 for a brick. I'd echo the Speed cut, maybe bump DEX to 18. Go DEX 18/SPD 5 and see how that feels. Drop INT to 13. 16 INT doesn't give you anything over 13. Make your COM 14. 3 points of COM rounds to 2 points; you may as well get the extra half point. Drop STUN down to 60 or so. 100 is quite a lot. Your stat block would look like this:

Val	Char	Cost
30	STR	20
18	DEX	24
28	CON	36
13	BODY	6
13	INT	3
11	EGO	2
18	PRE	8
14	COM	2
7	PD	1
7	ED	1
5	SPD	22
12	REC	0
56	END	0
60	STUN	18
6"	RUN	0
2"	SWIM	0
6"	LEAP	0

Characteristics Cost: 143Edit: Wow. I don't know why there's so much space above the stat block. Oh well. Anyway, that's a savings of almost 50 points, and you get a much more combat capable character.