hows this mystic look?

[Kefrem]

Spellbinder

 

Player:

 

Val	Char	Cost
10	STR	0
17	DEX	21
16	CON	12
10	BODY	0
18	INT	8
23	EGO	26
17	PRE	7
18	COM	4
4/26	PD	2
6/28	ED	3
5	SPD	23
7/12	REC	4
32/72	END	0
29	STUN	6

6" RUN02" SWIM02" LEAP0Characteristics Cost: 116

 

Cost	Power	END
45	Greater Magicks: Multipower, 67-point reserve, all slots: (67 Active Points); Gestures (-1/4), Incantations (-1/4)
3u	1) Crimson bands of Cyytorak or Rings of raggador: Entangle 3d6, 3 DEF, Takes No Damage From Attacks (Limited Group; +1/4), Cannot Be Escaped With Teleportation (+1/4), Works Against EGO, Not STR (+1/4) (52 Active Points) (uses END Reserve)	5
4u	2) Domination Magick: Mind Control 9d6, Reduced Endurance (Half END; +1/4) (56 Active Points) (uses END Reserve)	2
4u	3) Illusion magick: Mental Illusions 9d6, Reduced Endurance (Half END; +1/4) (56 Active Points) (uses END Reserve)	2
4u	4) Spell blast (magick based): Ego Attack 6d6 (60 Active Points) (uses END Reserve)	6
4u	5) Spell blast: Energy Blast 9d6 (vs. ED), Reduced Endurance (Half END; +1/4), Variable Special Effects (Limited Group of SFX; +1/4) (67 Active Points) (uses END Reserve)	3
4u	6) Gate travel: Extra-Dimensional Movement (Any Dimension, Any Location; x4 Increased Weight) (55 Active Points) (uses END Reserve)	5
23	Helpful Magick's: Elemental Control, 46-point Powers
43	1) Shield of the Seraphim: Force Field (22 PD / 22 ED), Reduced Endurance (0 END; +1/2) (66 Active Points) (added to Secondary Value)
6	2) Cloak of levitation: Flight 15", Reduced Endurance (0 END; +1/2) (45 Active Points); Independent (-2), IAF (-1/2)
38	Lesser Magick: VPP, 30 base + 8 control cost (45 Active Points); Limited Class Of Powers Available (Only Magic; -1/4), Gestures (-1/4), Incantations (-1/4)
0	1) Weather control: Change Environment(Any type of weather,Only affects normal weather) 1" radius (-2 PER Roll: Sight Group), Megascale (1" = 10 km; +1/2), Varying Effect (Broad Group; +1) (20 Active Points); Extra Time (1 Turn (Post-Segment 12); -1 1/4), Custom Modifier (-1/2) (uses END Reserve) Real Cost: 7	2
0	2) Voice Of The Mind: Mind Link (Any Willing Target; Number of Minds (x8)) (30 Active Points) Real Cost: 30
0	3) Athame: (Total: 30 Active Cost, 12 Real Cost) Killing Attack - Hand-To-Hand 1d6 (plus STR) (vs. PD) (15 Active Points); OAF (-1), No Knockback (-1/4) (uses Personal END) (Real Cost: 7) plus Killing Attack - Hand-To-Hand 1d6 (plus STR) (vs. ED) (15 Active Points); OAF (-1), Only Versus Evil Mystic Beings (-1), No Knockback (-1/4) (uses Personal END) (Real Cost: 5) Real Cost: 12	2
0	4) Spell Of Vitality: (Total: 30 Active Cost, 30 Real Cost) +5 REC (added to Secondary Value) (Real Cost: 10) plus +40 END (added to Secondary Value) (Real Cost: 20) Real Cost: 30
0	5) Awareness: Danger Sense (13-) (Area: Immediate Vicinity, Sensitivity: Any Danger) (30 Active Points) Real Cost: 30
0	6) Spell of Sustenance: Life Support (Safe in High Pressure, Safe in High Radiation, Safe in Intense Cold, Safe in Intense Heat, Safe in Low Pressure/Vacuum, Self-Contained Breathing) (19 Active Points) Real Cost: 19
0	7) Seeming: Shapeshift (Sight Group; Imitation, Variety of Shapes: Any Human Form) (30 Active Points) (uses END Reserve) Real Cost: 30	3
3	Magesense: Detect Magic 13- (5 Active Points); Concentration (0 DCV; -1/2)
13	Wings of needless sorrow: Telepathy 12d6 (60 Active Points); Independent (-2), Receive Only (-1/2), IAF (-1/2), Concentration (1/2 DCV; -1/4), Side Effects(if not constantly controlled,i.e. worn by a user, it will cause suicical intentions to all around it) (Side Effect always occurs whenever the character does some specific act -1/4) (uses Personal END)	6
25	Endurance Reserve (200 END, 15 REC) Reserve: (35 Active Points) REC: (15 Active Points); Limited Recovery (-2)
7	+7 Mental Defense (12 points total)
13	Astral projection(body is left behind): Desolidification , Costs END Only To Activate (+1/4) (50 Active Points); Extra Time (1 Turn (Post-Segment 12); -1 1/4), Custom Modifier (-1), Requires A Skill Roll (-1/2) (uses Personal END)	5
17	Flight 10", Reduced Endurance (0 END; +1/2) (30 Active Points); Linked to Astral projection(body is left behind) (-1/2), Lesser Power can only be used when character uses greater Power at full value (-1/4)

Powers Cost: 256

 

 

Cost	Skill
6	+2 with Greater Magick Multipower
1	Cryptography; Translation Only (-1/2) 8-
3	Mystic Society 12-
3	KS: Arcane & Occult Lore (INT-based) 13-
2	KS: Demonology 11-
3	KS: Magick (INT-based) 13-
1	CK: Lintalis 8-
0	Language: English: Idiomatic, native accent (Native Language)
1	Language: Atlantean: Basic Conversation
1	Language: Latin: Basic Conversation
3	Sleight Of Hand 12-
3	Stealth 12-
3	Teamwork 12-
7	Astral projection skill 13-

Skills Cost: 37

 

Cost	Perk
6	Contact: The Trismegistus Council (11-), Organization Contact (+2) (6 Active Points)

Perks Cost: 6

 

 

 

Total Character Cost: 415

 

Val	Disadvantages
10	Dependent NPC: Mieke (his black bat/monkey familiar), Normal, 8- (Infrequently)
10	Distinctive Features: Mystic Aura, Not Concealable, Always Noticed, Detectable Only By Unusual Senses
20	Hunted: Circle Of The Scarlet Moon, More Powerful, 8- (Occasionally), Capture, Extensive Non-Combat Influence
20	Hunted: VIPER, More Powerful, 8- (Occasionally), Capture, Extensive Non-Combat Influence
10	Hunted: Talisman, As Powerful, 8- (Occasionally), Kill
20	Psychological Limitation: Code Versus Killing, Common, Total
15	Social Limitation: Public Identity, Frequently (11-), Major
20	Vulnerability: Electrical, Common, Vulnerability Multiplier (2x STUN)
10	Vulnerability: Electrical, Common, Vulnerability Multiplier (1 1/2x BODY)
15	Susceptibility: Mana dead zones, Uncommon, 1d6 damage, per Phase

Disadvantage Points: 150

 

Base Points: 200

Experience Required: 65

Total Experience Available: 65

Experience Unspent: 0

 

i tweaked him from witchfire as i didnt have too much time to work on him for a campaign

[Steve Long]

This isn't the appropriate board for character evaluation posts -- this board is just for rules questions.

 

Post your character over on "HERO System Discussion" and you'll get lots of feedback.

 

In fact, let me try copying it over there to see how that works with this new software.