EDIT: file deleted, now that it's been uploaded to the main site. Get it from there.
By the way, please don't let me be a wet blanket for what you've done! I don't want this to be the thing that suddenly makes everyone dog pile with critiques, or to make you doubt what you'e done. Don't try to change anything for me. Your vision is your own, and it's a dang good one! I hope everyone is inspired by this!
Missed this earlier. Not a wet blanket at all: people shouldn't post things for criticism if they don't want criticism. There were lots of good comments in this thread, yours included. Thanks for taking the time to go over it.