DOVE/RAVEN for review

[MisterD]

I also have an interest in the Legacy game. I was just a bit late. But I made a character.

 

Well I made the character almost 2 years ago but with very little tweeking she fits (I think)

 

 

 

BACKGROUND

 

As all young children, Mindy had a normal childhood. Going to school, playing with friends and doing all the things a child does. She was your normal little kid till the age of 12.

 

At age 12 her back and upper shoulders grew malformations. Mindy was able to hide it for a few weeks under baggy and lose shirts. When her parents found out about the growths they took her to a doctor and discovered that the grows these the forming stages of wings.

 

Mindy went through a short period of jokes from her peers as her wings were forming. After they finished and she had actual wings she was a target of awe from her peers

 

Mindy's parents managed to contact REDHAWK, A winged hero from a neighboring city, they hoped would be able to mentor their daughter.. After many letters, Redhawk and the hero team he belonged to had Mindy and her family come visit.

 

After meeting with the Corman's, Redhawk decided to take Mindy as a student to learn to cope with being a winged teen and the team took Mindy on as an unofficial team mascot.

 

The Corman's moved to the new city and Mindy almost moved into the heroes base.

 

Redhawk taught Mindy how to cope and how to fly, It was also discovered that Mind could Generate and manipulate light and photonic energy manipulating powers.

 

By the age of 17 Mindy went with Redhawk when he continued his hero career after the team dissolved. (One member lost interest in the hero business and one lost her powers) and became his sidekick DOVE.

 

Mindy had an active life and Redhawk's sidekick and also became a media darling. This lasted till Redhawk and Dove fought with Shade. A dark force based villain. Shade was about to hit a dazed Redhawk with one of his bolts when Dove pushed him out of the way. The result was Redhawk recovered but Dove was gone.

 

NOTE: She was sucked into a dark dimension.

 

Result was Shade in the hospital, Redhawk retired, and Mindy/Dove had a very public and media intense memorial.

 

After pushing Redhawk out of the way of Shade’s bolt, everything literally went black. Mindy lost all senses except the sense that she was falling.

 

There was nothing she could do to help her plight. No breeze to catch so she could glide, nothing for her to grab on to. Nothing until she landed on solid ground with a painful crash and the knowledge that her wing was damaged.

 

She found herself in some woods. The sun seemed to be out but everything was a shade of dark gray.

 

A man, if you can call it a man, came riding something that looked like a black unicorn with red glowing eyes and flames coming from its hooves rode up to her. The creature and its companions were circling around Mindy talking in some language that she has never heard before.

 

As Mindy was trying to make her way away from these being she had a net thrown around her and was being dragged out of the woods. Out of the woods and to a castle. Not one of those Camelot type castles but those horror movie ones.

 

Mindy was dragged into a great hall where an even larger creature was sitting on a throne. As the creature on the throne was talking to the things that captured her in that weird language, a thin mockery of these creatures came up to her and poked and prodded her. He was examining her like some lab rat.

 

The thin thing then bent down, reaching through the net he grabbed and handful of feathers from her damaged wing and pulled. Mindy did not want to give these things the satisfaction of knowing they hurt her but pulling out those feathers hurt. She gave a sharp loud cry.

 

The little creature sitting on the steps to the throne made a disturbing giggling sound and clapped. She then tuned in a pleading voice talked to the seated creature.

 

The seated creature gave the little thing a disturbing looking smile and nodded. Mindy did not understand one word of this but she knew this was not good. She also discovered that she was unable to use her light powers here. She was in trouble.

 

Mindy was dragged up stairs into and through a bedroom of some sort. Into some hellish looking play room. A pitiful looking animal that was chained to the wall was dragged out and she took its place chained to the wall.

 

Mindy has spent an unknown length of time chained to the wall as this thing took pleasure in hurting her in every way imaginable and then some. Time, Hope, even her own identity lost meaning. All she was some toy for this little creature.

 

By the time Mindy accepted the tortures and no longer made those pain filled sounds that this ‘child’ seemed to crave, the ‘child’ came back but this time with the thin looking creature she met a long time ago.

 

He, Mindy assumed it was a he, showed the child a crystal. He walked over to the only window in the cell. As the dark sun shone into the cell and through the crystal a black ray emanated from it. He twisted the crystal till the beam bathed her and its light. And she again made those pain filled sounds the child liked.

 

When the light no longer bather her, Mindy found some of her feathers have turned black.

 

Over time more and more bathing in black light has ended with all her platinum blond hair and feathers turning black.

 

When the child lost interest Mindy was thrown into the arena so her last moments would be to entertain these sick creatures.

 

It seems that She retained the muscle memory of all the training she had and the not caring if she lived or died as long as she took as many of the creatures with her, she survived.

 

In fact she became a constant contender in the arena.

 

During one fight a nimbus formed in the arena, peering into the nimbus a memory sparked in Mindy. And she dove into it.

 

On the other side of the nimbus she was in a bright world, A group of colorfully dressed people that looked a lot more like her that the creatures she spent her life with were fighting some black clad person who seemed to be moving the nimbus around.

 

Mindy surprised everybody with her sudden appearance through the nimbus and even more surprised when she threw the black clad person through the nimbus.

 

She then did the only thing she could do. She collapsed. She was home.

[MisterD]

Re: DOVE/RAVEN for reviewRavenPlayer:

Val**	Char***	Cost
20**	STR	10
23**	DEX	39
20**	CON	20
12**	BODY	4
13**	INT	3
11**	EGO	2
20/30**	PRE	10
10**	COM	0
	*
28**	PD	4
15**	ED	1
4**	SPD	7
10**	REC	4
40**	END	0
40**	STUN	8

*6"**RUN02"**SWIM04"**LEAP0Characteristics Cost: 112

Cost**	Power	END
13**	Wings: Multipower, 20-point reserve, (20 Active Points); all slots Restrainable (-1/2)*
1u**	1) Flight 10" (20 Active Points); Restrainable (-1/2)*	2
1u**	2) Gliding 10" (10 Active Points); Restrainable (-1/2)*	0
1u**	3) Wing Buff: Hand-To-Hand Attack +4d6 (20 Active Points); Hand-To-Hand Attack (-1/2), Restrainable (-1/2)*	2
1u**	4) Wing Cocoon: +10 PD (10 Active Points); Restrainable (-1/2)*
**	*
37**	Calling Darkness: Darkness to Sight Group 3" radius, Personal Immunity (+1/4) (37 Active Points)*	4
45**	Darkforce Generation/Manipulation: Multipower, 45-point reserve*
4u**	1) Dark Blast: Energy Blast 8d6 (40 Active Points)*	4
3u**	2) Dark Blade: Killing Attack - Ranged 2d6 (30 Active Points)*	3
4u**	3) Dark Bonds: Entangle 3d6, 6 DEF (45 Active Points)*	4
4u**	4) Dark Breath: Drain STUN 3d6, Ranged (+1/2) (45 Active Points)*	4
4u**	5) Dark Force: Telekinesis (20 STR), Fine Manipulation (40 Active Points)*	4
4u**	6) Dark Kiss: Transfer 3d6 (Body to Body) (45 Active Points)*	4
2u**	7) Merge With Shadows: Invisibility to Sight Group (20 Active Points); Only In Darkness/Shadows (-1/4)*	2
**	*
7**	Seen worst in the arena: +10 PRE (10 Active Points); Defencive only (-1/2)*
20**	Armor (10 PD/10 ED) (30 Active Points); OIF (Protective Costume; -1/2)*	0

Powers Cost: 151

Cost**	Martial Arts Maneuver
5**	Flying Grab: 1/2 Phase, -2 OCV, -1 DCV, Grab Two Limbs, 30 STR for holding on; FMove*
5**	Passing Strike: 1/2 Phase, +1 OCV, +0 DCV, 4d6 +v/5; FMove*
5**	Offensive Strike: 1/2 Phase, -2 OCV, +1 DCV, 8d6 Strike*
4**	Nerve Strike: 1/2 Phase, -1 OCV, +1 DCV, 2d6 NND*

Martial Arts Cost: 19

Cost**	Skill
**	Everyman Skills*
0**	1) Acting 8-*
0**	2) AK: Native Country 8-*
0**	3) Climbing 8-*
0**	4) Concealment 8-*
0**	5) Conversation 8-*
0**	6) Deduction 8-*
0**	7) Language: English (Idiomatic, native accent; Custom Adder)*
0**	8) Paramedics 8-*
0**	9) Persuasion 8-*
0**	10) PS: Arena fighter 8-*
0**	11) Shadowing 8-*
0**	12) Stealth 8-*
0**	13) TF: Equines, Two-Wheeled Muscle-Powered Ground Vehicles*
**	*
3**	Acrobatics 14-*
3**	Analyze: Combat 12-*
3**	Breakfall 14-*
12**	+4 with Darkness Powers*
10**	+2 with DCV*
12**	+4 with Flying fighting style*
10**	Defense Maneuver I-IV *
3**	Tactics 12-*
3**	Teamwork 14-*
9**	WF: Common Martial Arts Melee Weapons, Common Melee Weapons, Common Missile Weapons, Garrote, Nets, Whips*

Skills Cost: 68

Val**	Disadvantages
15**	Distinctive Features: Winged Woman (Not Concealable; Noticed and Recognizable; Detectable By Commonly-Used Senses)*
10**	Enraged: Takes body in combat (Uncommon), go 11-, recover 14-*
15**	Enraged: Flashed (Uncommon), go 11-, recover 11-*
10**	Psychological Limitation: Claustrophobic (Common, Moderate)*
15**	Psychological Limitation: Reluctant to Kill (Common, Strong)*
10**	Physical Limitation: Wings flare out when angery (Frequently, Slightly Impairing)*
20**	Psychological Limitation: Gladiator Mentality (Very Common, Strong)*
10**	Rivalry: Professional (Other fighters), Rival is As Powerful, Rival is a Player Character, Seek to Outdo, Embarrass, or Humiliate Rival, Rival Aware of Rivalry*
15**	Social Limitation: Known Identity (Frequently, Major)*
10**	Social Limitation: Needs to get re-aqauinted with modern earth (Frequently, Minor)*
10**	Vulnerability: 1 1/2 x STUN Light Attacks (Common)*
10**	Vulnerability: 1 1/2 x STUN Light Attacks (Common)*

Disadvantage Points: 150

Base Points: 200Experience Required: 0Total Experience Available: 0Experience Unspent: 0Total Character Cost: 350

Height: 2.00 m	Hair: Brown
Weight: 100.00 kg	Eyes: Brown

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[MisterD]

Re: DOVE/RAVEN for reviewDOVEPlayer:

Val**	Char***	Cost
15**	STR	5
17**	DEX	21
10**	CON	0
10**	BODY	0
13**	INT	3
11**	EGO	2
10**	PRE	0
16**	COM	3
	*
5/20**	PD	2
2/7**	ED	0
4**	SPD	13
5**	REC	0
20**	END	0
23**	STUN	0

*6"**RUN02"**SWIM03"**LEAP0Characteristics Cost: 49

Cost**	Power	END
13**	Wings: Multipower, 20-point reserve, (20 Active Points); all slots Restrainable (-1/2)*
1u**	1) Gliding 10" (10 Active Points); Restrainable (-1/2)*	0
1u**	2) Flight 10" (20 Active Points); Restrainable (-1/2)*	2
1u**	3) Wing Buff: Hand-To-Hand Attack +2d6 (10 Active Points); Hand-To-Hand Attack (-1/2), Restrainable (-1/2)*	1
1u**	4) Wing Cocoon: +10 PD (10 Active Points); Restrainable (-1/2)*
**	*
40**	Light generation/manipulation: Multipower, 40-point reserve*
1u**	1) Light Burst: Sight Group Flash 2d6 (10 Active Points)*	1
2u**	2) Light blast: Energy Blast 5d6 (25 Active Points)*	2
4u**	3) Light Bomb: (Total: 37 Active Cost, 37 Real Cost) Energy Blast 3d6, Explosion (+1/2) (22 Active Points) (Real Cost: 22) plus Sight Group Flash 2d6, Explosion (+1/2) (15 Active Points) (Real Cost: 15)*	3
1u**	4) Spotlight: Sight Group Images 1" radius (2" Line; +0) (10 Active Points); Only To Create Light (-1)*	1
2u**	5) Strobe: Drain DEX 4d6 (40 Active Points); Increased Endurance Cost (x4 END; -1 1/2)*	16
**	*
6**	Natural resistance: Sight Group Flash Defense (6 points)*	0
10**	Armor (5 PD/5 ED) (15 Active Points); OIF (Padded Armor; -1/2)*	0

Powers Cost: 83

Cost**	Martial Arts Maneuver
5**	Passing Strike: 1/2 Phase, +1 OCV, +0 DCV, 3d6 +v/5; FMove*
5**	Passing Throw: 1/2 Phase, +0 OCV, +0 DCV, 3d6 +v/5; Target Falls; FMove*
5**	Flying Dodge: 1/2 Phase, -- OCV, +4 DCV, Dodge All Attacks, Abort; FMove*
5**	Flying Grab: 1/2 Phase, -2 OCV, -1 DCV, Grab Two Limbs, 25 STR for holding on; FMove*
0**	Weapon Element: Wings*

Martial Arts Cost: 20

Cost**	Skill
**	Everyman Skills*
0**	1) Acting 8-*
0**	2) AK: Native Country 8-*
0**	3) Climbing 8-*
0**	4) Concealment 8-*
0**	5) Conversation 8-*
0**	6) Deduction 8-*
0**	7) Language: English (Idiomatic, native accent; Custom Adder)*
0**	8) Paramedics 8-*
0**	9) Persuasion 8-*
0**	10) PS: Student 8-*
0**	11) Shadowing 8-*
0**	12) Stealth 8-*
0**	13) TF: Custom Adder, Two-Wheeled Muscle-Powered Ground Vehicles*
**	*
2**	Animal Handler (Birds) 11-*
3**	Breakfall 12-*
6**	+2 with light powers*
2**	KS: Redhawk's Common opponents 11-*
2**	PS: Sidekick 11-*
2**	SS: Light Physics 11-*
3**	Seduction 11-*
3**	Teamwork 12-*

Skills Cost: 23

Val**	Disadvantages
15**	Dependent NPC: Parents 8- (Normal; Group DNPC: x2 DNPCs)*
20**	Distinctive Features: Winged Teen with white/blond hair and white wings (Not Concealable; Always Noticed and Causes Major Reaction; Detectable By Commonly-Used Senses)*
5**	Physical Limitation: Wings flare out when scared or angery (Infrequently, Slightly Impairing)*
20**	Psychological Limitation: Code against Killing (Very Common, Strong)*
15**	Social Limitation: Known Identity (Frequently, Major)*

Disadvantage Points: 75

Base Points: 100Experience Required: 0Total Experience Available: 0Experience Unspent: 0Total Character Cost: 175

Height: 2.00 m	Hair: Brown
Weight: 100.00 kg	Eyes: Brown

Appearance: Personality: Quote:Background: BACKGROUND

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[MisterD]

Re: DOVE/RAVEN for review

 

OVer 50 views but no revies.

 

I guess the character is OK then.