Post Apocolyptic character for review

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The concept is "Wild Child" Anything I've forgotten?

 

Feral Kid
Val	Char	Cost	Roll	Notes
5	STR	-5	10-	Lift 57.4kg; 1d6 HTH damage
18	DEX	24	13-	OCV: 6/DCV: 6
15	CON	10	12-
8	BODY	-4	11-
12	INT	2	11-	PER Roll 11-
12	EGO	4	11-	ECV: 4
10	PRE	0	11-	PRE Attack: 2d6
12	COM	1	11-
4	PD	3	Total: 7 PD (3 rPD)
4	ED	1	Total: 7 ED (3 rED)
4	SPD	12	Phases:  3, 6, 9, 12
4	REC	0
30	END	0
20	STUN	1	Total Characteristics Cost: 58
Movement:	Run: 9"/NC"
Swim: 4"/NC"

Cost	Powers	END
3	"Apparently made of rubber": Contortionist 13-	
4	Double Jointed	
6	feral senses: Enhanced Perception (+2 to PER Rolls for All Sense Groups)	
6	"Can use feet as hands": Extra Limbs , Inherent (+1/4) (6 Active Points)	
5	"The Disney Effect": Luck 1d6	
10	Small: +2 with DCV	
1	Iron Stomach: Life Support , Eating:  Character does not eat (3 Active Points); Eating only, character can eat almost anything organic Power loses about half of its effectiveness (-1)	

Talents
6	Combat Luck (3 PD/3 ED)
6	Ambidexterity (Reduce Off Hand Penalty to -1)

Skills
3	Climbing 13-
2	Animal Handler (Canines) 11-
3	Breakfall 13-
7	Concealment 13-
3	Stealth 13-
11	Survival (Temperate/Subtropical Forests) 16-
6	AK: The Surrounding Territory 15-
10	Two-Weapon Fighting (HTH) 
1          wf Knives
Total Powers & Skills Cost: 92
Total Cost: 150

75+	Disadvantages
10	Distinctive Features:  Feral child (Concealable; Noticed and Recognizable; Detectable By Commonly-Used Senses)
10	Physical Limitation:  Small (Frequently; Slightly Impairing)
15	Social Limitation:  Child (Frequently; Major)
10	Physical Limitation:  Uneducated and Unfamilar with culture (Infrequently; Greatly Impairing)
10	Physical Limitation:  Limited Vocabulary (Frequently; Slightly Impairing)
15	Psychological Limitation:  Feral and instinctive (Common; Strong)
5	Psychological Limitation:  Curious (Uncommon; Moderate)
0	Normal Characteristic Maxima

Total Disadvantage Points: 150

 

Background: The feral girl is the sole survivor of the Douglas family a couple of hermits that lived in the hills above town, eking out a lonely existence in a isolated and well fortified cabin. The Douglas’s were an odd couple and somewhat touched in the head, fearful of strangers and downright hostile to outsiders. They kept a store of canned and preserved foods from Before hoarded in their retreat along with preserved meats and hides, delving into their stores only in emergencies and entering town only to trade. Ironically, it was the disease they so feared that brought them down, Edward Douglas succumbing to fever during a long hard winter. His wife, Melinda, who had given birth to their single daughter four years before tried to hold out but growing ill herself, semi delirious tried to make her way into town to find help for herself and her infant daughter and vanished. The child, schooled in the requirements of survival she managed to make it through the winter living on stores and eating squirrels and other rodents. It was nothing short of a miracle and the girl’s continued survival only compounded it. Her own instincts and her parent’s rather obsessive preparation for bad times kept alive threw the next winter, and the next as the child grew more and more feral as well as larger and stronger on her own. She became quite familiar with the surrounding woods and living off the land and surprisingly skilled with the pair of bowie knives she found. She was able to bring down progressively larger animals and often ran with the former family dogs as a hunting pack. Recently “others†have entered what the feral child regards as “her†territory and she has chosen to investigate.

 

Appearance: The feral child is a stringy, skinny wiry girl of about 8 years old, perhaps a small 10. Her features are sharp and somewhat bestial, half hidden under long unkempt and dirty blonde hair. She’s dressed in rags and dirty furs, most of them tied on crudely and ill fitting. In winter she simply adds more layers and doesn’t venture out much. She’s quite dirty, with layers of grime built up but under it all is fair skinned. Her eyes are brilliant and piercing blue.