[character review] Maria Sanchez

[JmOz]

For the Pulp Sci Fi again

 

This time former gang leader, now working as a waitress while going to school to become a nurse, please critique

 

Maria Sanchez

 

Player:

 

Val Char Cost

13 STR 3

18 DEX 24

15 CON 10

9 BODY -2

18 INT 8

11 EGO 2

13 PRE 3

18 COM 4

 

3/6 PD 0

3/6 ED 0

3 SPD 2

6 REC 0

30 END 0

25 STUN 1

 

6" RUN 0

2" SWIM 0

2 1/2" LEAP 0

Characteristics Cost: 55

 

Cost Power

10 Luck 2d6

Powers Cost: 10

 

 

Cost Skill

1 AK 8-

1 Acting 8-

1 Climbing 8-

1 Combat Driving 8-

1 Computer Programming 8-

3 Concealment 13-

1 Conversation 8-

1 Criminology 8-

1 Deduction 8-

3 KS: Common Knowledge (earth) 13-

3 Language: English (completely fluent)

4 Language: Spanish (idiomatic)

3 Lockpicking 13-

2 PS: Gang leader 11-

1 PS: Nurse 8-

2 PS: Waitress 11-

3 Paramedics 13-

1 Persuasion 8-

1 SS: Medicine 8-

3 Security Systems 13-

3 Seduction 12-

3 Shadowing 13-

3 Stealth 13-

3 Streetwise 12-

0 TF: Small Motorized Ground Vehicles

1 Teamwork 8-

4 WF: Common Melee Weapons, Small Arms

Skills Cost: 54

 

 

Cost Talent

6 Combat Luck (3 PD/3 ED)

Talents Cost: 6

 

Total Character Cost: 125

 

Pts. Disadvantage

10 Social Limitation: Dark Secret: Ex Drug Addict/Gang member (Occasionally, Major)

15 Psychological Limitation: Humanitarian (Very Common, Moderate)

10 Vulnerability: 2 x Effect Addiction (Uncommon)

15 Psychological Limitation: Overconfident (Very Common, Moderate)

Disadvantage Points: 50

Base Points: 75

Experience Required: 0

Total Experience Available: 0

Experience Unspent: 0

[Lord Fyre]

Re: [character review] Maria Sanchez

 

We need more information. Tell us about her background, history, personality, motivations, appearance (beyond 18 Comeliness)!

 

For example,

- What kind of gang?

- Why did she leave? Why did she abandon the lifestyle so completely?

- Why did she select nurse for her future profession?

[Lord Fyre]

Re: [character review] Maria Sanchez

 

10 Vulnerability: 2 x Effect Addiction (Uncommon)

 

Can you clarify this one? I have heard of that being an attack form.

 

This might work better as an Infrequent, Greatly physical limitation.

[JmOz]

Re: [character review] Maria Sanchez

 

Will give more bio data in a bit

 

As for the vunerability, I figure that the basis for becoming addicted was the transform power, thus the x2 effect

[JmOz]

Re: [character review] Maria Sanchez

 

We need more information. Tell us about her background, history, personality, motivations, appearance (beyond 18 Comeliness)!

 

For example,

- What kind of gang?

- Why did she leave? Why did she abandon the lifestyle so completely?

- Why did she select nurse for her future profession?

 

MOst are tied together, it was s treet gang, made up of girls

 

I was thinking that she and her sister were in a drive by, her sister died, She overheard one of the EMT's saying how if they had got to her a little bit earlier that they could have saved her, but the loss of blood was to great. She was a ble to get into a nursing program at a local college, barely...