Aqua revisited for review

[MisterD]

Aqua

 

Player:

 

Val	Char	Cost
10	STR	0
18	DEX	24
20	CON	20
12	BODY	4
13	INT	3
11	EGO	2
15	PRE	5
18	COM	4
10	PD	8
10	ED	6
4	SPD	12
12	REC	12
40	END	0
27	STUN	0

6" RUN018" SWIM017" LEAP0Characteristics Cost: 100

 

Cost	Power	END
	Body of Water
60	1) Physical Damage Reduction, Resistant, 75%
30	2) Energy Damage Reduction, Resistant, 50%
27	3) Body Of Water: Desolidification (affected by water, fire, cold attacks) (40 Active Points); Cannot Pass Through Solid Objects (-1/2)	4
48	Water generation/manipulation: Multipower, 60-point reserve, all slots: (60 Active Points); Custom Modifier (Requires humidity; -1/4)
5u	1) Water Blast: Energy Blast 12d6 (60 Active Points)	6
4u	2) Pushing Water Blast: Energy Blast 6d6, Double Knockback 2x KB (+3/4) (52 Active Points)	5
4u	3) Splash Blast: (Total: 60 Active Cost, 43 Real Cost) Energy Blast 8d6 (Real Cost: 40) plus Sight Group Flash 4d6 (20 Active Points); Linked to Energy Blast (-1/2) (Real Cost: 13)	6
3u	4) Spash In The Face: Sight and Additional Sense Groups Flash 6d6 (35 Active Points)	3
4u	5) Opaque Water Wall: Force Wall (10 PD/8 ED) (Opaque: Sight Group) (55 Active Points)	5
4u	6) Fire Extinguisher: Dispel Fire Powers 12d6, One At A Time (+1/4) (45 Active Points)	4
2u	7) Hydrokinesis: Telekinesis (30 STR), Affects Porous (55 Active Points); Only On Water (-1)	5
16	Hydro-propulsion: Multipower, 16-point reserve
2u	1) Super-Swimming: +16" Swimming (18" total) (16 Active Points)	2
1u	2) Water Column: Flight 8" (16 Active Points); Only Within 8" Of Water (-1 1/2)	2
1u	3) Geyser: Leaping +15" (12" forward, 6" upward) (15 Active Points)	1

Powers Cost: 211

 

 

Cost	Skill
3	Bugging 12-
3	Bureaucratics 12-
4	Computer Programming (Computer Networks, Personal Computers) 12-
3	Criminology 12-
2	KS: Environmental protection polocies 11-
2	PS: Environmental Protection agency water ways department 11-
6	+2 with Water/Ice attacks
6	Penalty Skill Levels: +3 vs. Range Modifier with Woater generation/manipulation
	Everyman Skills
0	1) Acting 8-
0	2) Climbing 8-
0	3) Concealment 8-
0	4) Conversation 8-
0	5) Deduction 8-
0	6) Paramedics 8-
0	7) Persuasion 8-
0	8) Shadowing 8-
0	9) Stealth 8-
0	10) TF: Custom Adder, Small Motorized Ground Vehicles [Notes: Custom Mod is Everyman Skill]
2	11) KS: Environmental Law 11-

Skills Cost: 31

 

Cost	Perk
2	Fringe Benefit: Local Police Powers
3	Access
3	Computer Link

Perks Cost: 8

 

 

 

Total Character Cost: 350

 

Val	Disadvantages
20	DF: Made of water (Not Concealable; Always Noticed and Causes Major Reaction; Detectable By Commonly-Used Senses)
5	Side Effect: Everything she touches get wet.
20	Enraged: Facing Toxic-Waste dumpers (Uncommon), go 14-, recover 11-
15	Hunted: Eliminatrix Waste Management Lmtd. 8- (As Pow; Harshly Punish; PC has a Public ID or is otherwise very easy to find)
15	Phys. Lim.: Body made of water (All the Time; Slightly Impairing)
10	Psych. Lim.: Protective of natural water sources (Uncommon; Strong)
10	Psych. Lim.: Hunting Eliminatrix Waste Managment Lmtd. (Uncommon; Strong)
15	Soc. Lim.: Public ID: Holly Hunter / AQUA (Frequently; Major)
10	Susceptibility: Touching alot of poluted water 1d6 damage, per Turn (Uncommon)
10	Reputation: Environmentally Conscious Heroine 11-
10	Vulnerability: 1 1/2 x STUN Fire/Heat attacks (Common)
10	Vulnerability: 1 1/2 x BODY Fire/Heat attacks (Common)

Disadvantage Points: 150

 

Base Points: 200

Experience Required: 0

Total Experience Available: 0

Experience Unspent: 0

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Sadly, I am not going to have the chance to read this through in detail for a few days, but as one of the people who commented on the original, I must say this version looks a lot better. In fact, my first impression is that it's pretty good.

[MisterD]

Thanks.

 

I hope to hear more from you.

 

You and the other members of this board have and still do give me very good help.

 

After all this help I plan on posting my characters to my website.