Revenant

Re: STUN/BODY reach 0 If memory serves (the GM is the only one that actually owns 5th ed), when Stun goes to 0, End goes to 0. When Body goes to 0, Stun doesn't go to 0 and neither does End. This basically simulates that you can be concious while bleeding to death.

only read first chapter but from what I read, the story has alot of potential. The writing is very well done, though in places it moved slightly slower than I would have liked, the action was very well written, and the characterization was well done. Over all, if this was a paper that I needed to grade, I'd give it an A.

team composition While there are several elements a team needs, such as varied capabilities (at least one ranged attacker and one damage soaker), the more important elements answer the question "What do I bring to the team?". Any team needs people who are good with a battle plan, those that are good at directing people, those that can keep the team healthy, and finally and possibly most important, those that are good at deciphering clues. With these elements, a decent team could even be developed from a single archtype.