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Here's what I have so far on my character, Nemesis. Constructive criticism is welcome. If I'm on the wrong thread, sorry about that. lol
Background Story: The Cartiers were an American success story. Thomas was a successful businessman, heading a mutlinational conglomerate. His wife, Martha, was a renowned surgeon. They had three children, all very bright, ambitious children. Their oldest child, Emily, was a gymnast considered by many to be a front runner to make the US Olympic team. Thomas, Jr. showed a great scientific potential at a young age. Bruce was a talented artist, despite being only ten years old. They were the social elite of Newport City, until their world was destroyed.
The Cartiers were celebrating Emily’s 15th birthday with a small dinner at an exclusive Italian restaurant. All the Cartiers were in attendance, as was their butler, Pierre, at Emily’s request. It was a pleasant dinner that turned frighteningly wrong. The cake had just been brought out when several men walked in, calmly lifted automatic weapons and started firing. If that wasn’t bad enough, several men appeared from a back room and returned the fire. Screams filled the restaurant as patrons were caught in the crossfire, including the Cartiers. Emily felt a flash of pain in her lower back as she dove under the table, taking her youngest brother Bruce with her. She was horrified to see his surprised expression, wide open vacant eyes and the blood covering his shirt. She gritted her teeth as the gunfire continued, laying perfectly still and weeping over her brother’s body as she saw her family fall to the ground, dead. She was still laying with Bruce, crying, when the police arrived to clean up the carnage.
While Emily was laying in the hospital, in traction, Pierre’s brother Andres visited her, giving her someone to share her grief with. Someone who understood the pain she was going through. Emily had no family left, neither did Andres. It was in the hospital that she looked Andres in the eye and swore she wouldn’t rest until her family was avenged and Newport City was safe for other families.
Emily wasn’t able to attend her parents’ funeral due to her injuries, which was yet another reason in her mind to avenge them. She was released in a wheelchair for the reading of her parents’ will. At the reading, it was discovered that in the event of the Cartier parents’ death, Pierre would become the children’s legal guardian, Andres being named if Pierre wasn’t able to do so. Thus formed a relationship that has endured to the present day.
She was another month in the hospital with daily therapy before being released. The Olympic hopeful walked out of the hospital on crutches, with both legs in braces. What the public didn’t know, and would never find out, is that her doctor sympathized with her dilemma and had lost someone to mob violence when he was younger, so he’d made sure her records showed that she didn’t respond to the physical therapy as had been hoped. The fact of the matter was that she’d shown remarkable progress, exhibiting a determination that wouldn’t be denied.
With Andres shielding her from outside interference, Emily retired to her family’s penthouse to begin preparing herself for her mission. She’d been taking martial arts since a young age as a means of defending herself and helping with her conditioning and she continued her training in the martial arts and gymnastics on her own, working steadily for six hours a day. The rest of her time, she spent studying many subjects that would help her. Forensics, criminology, security systems, chemistry and many other subjects, bringing to bear a keen intelligence and an ability to focus that most had overlooked in her due to her athletic ability.
Finally, she decided that she’d learned all she could on her own, so she set out to find the finest teachers in the world to gain the benefit of their expertise. She disguised herself, using false names, as she sought the tutelage of the best the world had to offer.
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Re: A Thread for Random Musings
Writing a background/origin for a grim and gritty character isn't the easiest thing in the world to do.
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Re: Longest Running Thread EVER
Look' date=' as long as my pants were around my ankles, they were still [i']on[/i]! It was perfectly legal!There's a mental picture I just didn't need.
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Re: A Thread for Random Musings
How many times do I have to ask people to drop the whole bat fu thing before they actually drop it?
And when can I justifiably get angry when they don't? Because, frankly, I'm getting tired of having to ask and not being able to use an avatar I love for fear of it starting in earnest again.
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Re: Longest Running Thread EVER
Ever been so scared by something that you laughed really hard?Are you sure?
Can't say that I have, and I hope I can say that on my death bed.
And considering your past history of tolerance for some pretty horrid behavior, I figured you were going more for amusement than anything else.
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I could, but then I'd lose the fear that I've insilled in your hearts to keep posting to this thread.Fear? I was wondering what effect you were trying for.
I figured the amusement I felt wasn't it.
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Um... All y'all?I'm sorry! The mentally challenged are all on the political threads. Please try again.
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Kara, there are many who are masters of hyperbole, but very few who strive to be "masters of understatement" actually achieve that lofty goal...
...and I think you just blew them all away!
(goes off muttering to himself) Kara is 'perky'?!? Sure...the same way the Titanic was 'big', the moon landing was 'an accomplishment', the X-15 was 'fast'...
Kara has many talents. And a pretty damned good sense of timing. lol
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*measures his poll* Nope... only 10 ft. I'm not touching that one.Good call!
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You'll get banned twice.That's right, I'll ban you, unban you and then ban you again. Cuz I get off on that kind of stuff.
Who do you think you're fooling?
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How do the little bundles of joy get so independent at those ages?It's God's way of paying us back for what we did to our parents. lol
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My niece is teething too, her 1st birthday in a couple of days. She can walk and loves her grandparents.One is 2 and as always at that age cute, fun, and a handful. He is very definately got his own mind and states so frequently.
The eldest is nearly five, one month approx to go. I'm sure he is counting the sleeps. He went from Pre-school straight to Transition (he skipped Pre-Transition) and is just starting playing sport.
Excellent. The twins are five, Faith's four, and Erin will be one toward the end of May, so I'm very familiar with the ages you're talking about.
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Good point. How are the little ones?They're doing just fine. Three are sleeping, and Erin is settling down. She's teething, so she's not a very happy camper these days.
How are you and yours doing?
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try harderlol Maybe if this were the only thread I were following, or the only thing I was doing on the computer.
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I'm tired. I am very tired. I can't believe how I read that post initially...I probably don't want to know. lol
Night, SS.
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Well' date=' I'm off to bed. Gotta get some sleep and Rachel isn't posting it would seem so my power is draining. [/quote']Hell, I can't keep up. lol
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Yeah it was' date=' I hated the book, so didn't even try to watch the movie.[/quote']I watched that piece of crap all the way through, waiting for something interesting to happen.
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I HATED Sphere' date=' but I know people who loved it. Go figure.[/quote']Was that what the crappy movie with Hoffman and Stone was based on?
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Re: Storn's Art & Characters thread.
It is fine by me' date=' as long as I get credit, and a link to my website. I never mind more exposure. However, since it is Death Tribble's character portrait, I think it would be nice to ask him.[/quote']Thanks, Storn. I'll pass it on to Kara.
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Recently, there have been a couple of threads started about faith. I know they're not about my daughter, but that's always my first thought when I see the title on the forum. lol
Longest Running Thread EVER
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Re: Another topic to discuss: The First NGD thread
Several that lasted more than one season:
"The Jeffersons" and "Maude" both spun off from "All in the Family". "Good Times" spun off of "Maude".
As Dr. Anomaly mentioned, "The Bionic Woman" spun off of "Six Million Dollar Man" and of course did well. The premise was aimed at young men, primarily, and who would young men rather look at, Lee Majors or Lindsay Wagner?
"Lou Grant" spun off from "Mary Tyler Moore". This, too, was mentioned.
"Petticoat Junction" and "Green Acres" basically spun off from "The Beverly Hillbillies".
"Mayberry RFD" spun off from "The Andy Griffith Show".
And let's not forget the Law and Order and CSI spin offs.
I know there's more, but I can't think of them at the moment.