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  1. Valor the cat knight

     

    Valor comes from another dimension a world where the common house cat is the dominate species around the time the humans ancestors where thinking about coming down from theaters one of valor’s ancestors developed low level telekinesis it wasn’t much but it was enough to out perform every other creature and so it went the cats became smarter with every generation there psychic powers grew who needs opposable thumbs when you can move objects with your mind so the cat species developed roll forwards about a million years and the cat species has reached its feudal period the most powerful psychics become dominate with a order of knights formidable telekinetic to watch over them and seers and mystics to advise. Valor was born a royal prince heir to the throne of one of the more powerful kingdoms of the known feline world that was sunlit his uncle decided he wanted the throne for him self the massacre of valor's family happened on a hunting expedition the cats had for centuries hunted the ferocious mice (imagine a world where cats have psychic powers and then think how dangerous the mice would become to survive). The mice generate a paces dampening field so must be hunted using telemetrically thrown weapons the royal family ride out to hunt and valor’s uncle unleashed his plots a swarm of trained killer rats swarmed the royal family crushing there psychic defenses with ease the ferocious rodents tore through the royal family all except valor who was in bed recuperating from an accident during his military training the pervious day.

     

    Valor was roused from his slumber by his father’s chief seer

    “Sire you must come with me the most black treachery is afootâ€

    Valor limped behind the seer

    Tell me seer what is this treachery of which yours peak he commanded

    But the seer mealy said there is no time quickly we must flee the castle you must be safe or all is lost they fled to the chambers of the kings great scorer my Leigh I have grave news your family they are all slain killed by your uncle he seeks the throne.

     

    Then he will have to face me to get it valor said baring his teeth and hissing angrily

    Sire you must leave you are not fit to face him and he has many allies you must not return till we have made plans or all is lost

     

    I have found a place top hide you one where even your uncle cannot reach but you must go now or all is lost.

     

    No I will face him now not flee like a kitten

    Sire I did not wish to do this but if I must the seer said sorrowfully

    And projected the vision he had witnessed the death of the royal family the rats swarming over there victims the king fighting valiantly but to no avail as the rats swarmed biting him till he could no longer stand and then seaming over him a frenzy of destruction valor cried and then he saw what would happen if he stayed his death at his uncles hands and the unending darkness that would fall across the land valor reluctantly agreed

    Quickly then sire I will open a partial to another wool one where your uncle may not follow it is much like ours but our kind are not the dominate being instead it is a large hairless ape.

     

    How strange valor muttered and what of our kind sire they seem to all be retarded they seem like our youngest kittens unable to speak to each others minds or use the invisible paws sire but you will be safe there sire.

    And with that the sorcerer cast his incantation that the doorway opened the prince ran through hearing behind him the sound of the door bursting open and his uncles minions but he did not se the fate of his fathers advisors as the doorway shut behind him. Valor collapsed in the alley where he arrived falling unconscious with eth pain of his wound and the emotional strain he awake trapped in a cage surrounded by the other cats he tried calling out to them with his mind but they where unable to hear him and he did not understand there language a strongly garbed naked ape stood across stem room standing at a table covered in what looked like alchemical tools another cat sat on the bench and the ape was about to do something with huge metal needle valor hissed with rage his telekinesis tearing his cage asunder and he dived at his captor tearing the syringe from his hand and then tearing the restraints from the other cat with his powerful invisible paws he stood on the bench trying the rouse the other cat

    And fail to notice the naked ape produce something from his pocket and suddenly valor’s world was pain the man had taser'd him for the next 3 days valor drifted in and out off consciousness sending with all his strength when ever he could before passing out again as the drugs he was fed caught hold his captor subjected him to a barrage of test trying tow or out how these cat could have such power on the third night a small figure crept into the lab and unlocked valor’s cage valor was unconscious again the dregs and the pain of the tests and his injury he sent out a psychic scream please no more it hurts to much and then he heard a voice in his head "I know I know I felt it too I’m here to rescue you I am........"He didn’t understand the word she thought to him he thought back his name the voice came in his mind again I don’t understand hmm thought valor he sent the concept instead oh your called valor another concept was returned ash so you are a sage but still but a kitten to your kind well valor the kittens age thought we must go no valor said I have recovered some what since you freed me from the vile potion I must avenge this injustice valor rose groggily through the air drifting towards the sleeping quarters of his former captor the kitten sage followed valor bounded up onto the bed and walked across the mans chest

     

    The man stirred looking up at the cat that sat on his chest how did you get out again?

     

    Tell him I am here to end his evil as is my sworn duty to protect my weaker brethren and with that valor pinned his former captive to the bed pressing him down with his telekinesis you deserve to suffer for the pain you have inflicted valor said the sage reputed his word dumbly in her own language but aim sworn never to take the life of a defeated opponent my dear sage could you summon your kings guards the sage thought fro a moment oh you mean the police she muttered the police arrived 20 minutes later to find the ware house a man bound to a chair surrounded by cats on his lap was pile of documents detailing his crimes from theft of pets to illegal experimentation

     

    Valor came to live with his kitten sage and as they taught each other there language he learnt her name was Helen or Dr Hel and she still called him valor as no human tongue could pronounce his cat name.

     

    Valor is a small black cat well fed and lithe he is completely back part from a white star of fur between his eyes he is a powerful telekinetic capable of lifting large weights flight and other telekinetic tricks he is unfortunately not a powerful telepath only able to send short distances and he finds it every draining to do so to none sensitive he mostly communicates via Dr Hel though those who are around him a lot will learn the rudiments of the cat language even if they can not speak it he is able to convey a lot via body language and tone of voice.

     

    Other thjan that valor is like a normal house cat his agility and speed backed up with exellent night vision and smell and unervingly fast reflexes

     

    Valor's uncle still seeks him and valor is deathly afraid that his uncle will send his hunting rats to kill him the way he did his family

     

    Valor fights injustice on earth firstly because he is sworn to by his chivalric code and secondly as he must develop his strength and skill so he may return home and restore the throne though he knows if he does he will miss his friends here.

  2. i got abit to into these two so there a bit narrative and need some serious work but its 5 am so youll have to have them as tehy stand i will write up silver hawk in day or two.

     

    Dr. Hel

     

    Most people know DR hell as the star of a series of children’s books where the heroine Dr Hel (short for Helen) and her talking cat valor have adventures and saves the world with her knowledge of science and moths (not to mention history and language) which have parents and teachers singing there praises and children everywhere screaming for more what most people don’t know is that the 13 year old multiple PhD in the book is real the woman on the back off the books is an actress paid to pretend to be the author.

     

     

    Dr Hel’s or Helen Jane Emmett’s (her full name) story begins when she was 2 years old. Her parents hadn’t wanted her they had wanted a son neither had been all that bothered about looking after her they had hired a nurse to look after her while they both worked when she was two year sold her parents enrolled her in a day care center after one week they got a call from the center demanding them to come right away they didn’t consider it an emergency after all that’s what the staff at the day care center was for looking after there worthless daughter if she had an accident or something. Eventually they arrived the building was in uproar Helen was sat at the front of the class reading aloud to the rest of her class as the various staff stood on amazed.

     

    The principle rushed them into her office, the first question she asked did you teach her to read? The Emmett’s look blank well as you know we started your daughter on the alphabet last week well yes well today she read peter pan to the class we don’t know how she did it your daughter is incredibly gifted the dollar signs rolled over her parents eyes a genius child there where the talk shows the movie deals the book deals the lecture circuit quiz shows you name it Helen became the goose that laid the golden egg from that day forward her parents hired tutors sent her to the best schools paid for any study course she wanted by age 7 Helen was almost finished high school by age 9 she had completed her first degree in mathematics by age 11 she had completed another 6 and was working on 3 masters but what Helen really wanted to be was ballerina but her parents said no what if she fell what if she hurt her precious head. Of course Helen simply out thought them

    Forging there signatures on permission slips she created a fake bank account for a fictitious online course then she used the money to pay for her ballet lessons pretending to go to the library ego her hidey hole she pilled on her ballet costume and vanished off to classes ballet was the hardest thing Helen had ever done in her life challenging her body not just her mind it took 3 grueling months before she lost her awkwardness her body became accustomed to the strain eventually she was ready easily mastering each new move she was taught one day her teacher brought in a video of the Russian ballet performing the nutcracker Helen watched transfixed the video ended. Helen found her self with tears in her eyes the teacher announced that they could be performing once scene from the nutcracker for the recital in 3 months time Helen raised her hand

     

    “ I already know that scene ma’amâ€

    “Really†here teacher said incredulously

    “Yes ma’amâ€

    The teacher was annoyed by Helens arrogance and decided to put her in her place

    She demanded that she showed them

    And Helen did performing a perfect rendition of the scene including every nuance of the Russian ballerinas performance the whole class looked on aghast. That was Helens downfall the teacher immediately rang her parents to inform them of the amazing gift there daughter had and they drive to the ballet school immediately dragged her out of class and grounded her for 6 months not to mention burning her ballet outfit in front of her. And that was it Helen could no longer dance that’s when Helen decided she had to get out it took the whole of her 6 months as prisoner in her parents house homes schooled forbidden from leaving the house. She secretly began obtaining another degree studying online this time in law at the end of her imprisonment she began to visit the library every day being closely watched by her parents as she was she would visit each day pretending to gather books on many subjects but really working her way through the libraries law section.

     

    An then in secret she prepared the final stage of her plan she drafted the legal documents that would divorce her parents and grant her into the care of her great aunt a former university professor living in Boston. It worked as she stood in court opposite her parents her great aunt by her side and the judge asked weather the young ladies lawyer would be arriving soon she reapplied “I’m sorry you seem to be misinformed your honor I will be representing my self I did attempt to apply for the bar accusation but they don’t appear to allow people of my age in sill that be a problem.†Her parents high priced lawyers presented there case and Helen cut them down at every turn sitting precedent and case law that left her parent; lawyers scratching there heads by the end Helen was granted her separation from her parents and the judge demanded they pay her alimony each month Helen refused this stating that she required nothing from her parents and would be paying them back all the expenses that she had incurred for them a month later the first Dr Hell book hit the bookshops and within 6 months Dr Hel was a global sensation. Her parents paid off and living happily with her aunt in Boston she found something missing from her life he took up ballet again but found she quickly grew bored as she learned everything her teachers had to know she tried gymnastics but soon she was bored again and then aikido

    But yet gain she quickly learnt all her sensei had to teach Helen had no idea what to do next then she was invited to tea with one of her aunts old friends a professor in ancient south American mythology. It took Helen less than an hour of quite observation to deduce the friends secret that she was the legendary superhero “SILVER HAWK†now every day Dr Hel visits her aunts friend who attempts to mentor at night she secretly assist the police emailing detailed analysis of crimes and donning a costume of her own design fights criem utilizing combination of a selection of gadgets of her own design her balletic grace and martial arts moves. She is joined in these endeavors by silver hawk and her constant companion Valor the cat knight who she liberated from a twisted animal scientist.

     

    DR Hel has a formidable IQ backed up with a true photographic memory and photographic reflexes she quickly learns any new skill with only a brief amount of practice her costume is based around the character in the doctor Hel novels the press believe her to be a publicity stunt for the books or perhaps a junior super who is copying the character the costume is an armored black body suit worn under a pair of jeans and an oversized tee-shirt with Helens obsession of the week boy band or animal or what have you. With a white lab coat and special mute-spectrum goggles Helen also wears lifts in her shoes to make her self she carries a messenger bag contain her gizmos mostly non lethal restraints and stunning weapons with a few tools and detectors thrown in

     

    Helen is also slightly psychic due to her formidable brain power not enough that she could really develop it further she is just slightly more sensitive to telepathic sending than most normal humans which is why valor likes her so much and a mild danger sense

  3. how about a charecter lets call them schrodigers cat

    who can only use his powers when not being wtached so if no one sees him he can choose not to die from a fatal wound teleport move at great speed but only when not being actively watched. as a watcher would force him into one probability without him being able to choose him self. thats got to ber a pretty hefty disadvantage.

  4. hmmm I'm working on a character with 9 lives i didnt just want him to regenrate or resurect i was thinking about some very powerful armour with the limitation only when damage would be fatal, so he might be badly injured when he was caught in a bomb blast but the explosion woudl carry him out the window into a mattress factory so would that work?

  5. well it would have to be the Annual GQ/vogue/MTV international superhuman fashion awards brought to you in association with dupont "the science behind the fashion". the award its self is a caped version of the oscar with a genric costume cast into it with the latin equivilent of "kicking butt and looking good doing it"around its feet and would be called the supey pronounced soup e.

  6. Hulk Eyre

    James Macdougal

    Is a man out of time born in Scotland in the depths of the middle ages he was orphaned by the plague and left in the care of a local monetary he grew fast and he grew strong laboring with the monks though he never found his place in the monetary.

     

    During his time with the monks he learnt his letters and eventually apprenticed with an Eyre an itinerant royal justice.

    They traveled the north of England dispensing justice eventually he became an Eyre him self but the temptations of drink gambling and women soon overwhelmed him after his strict monastic upbringing.

     

    Seeking to pay for his vices he started taking bribes to relapse the guilty to take from the wronged and to lay the blame at another’s door with his ferocious size and his royal patronage none would stand against him until one-day lords son had committed afoul murder killing an entire family.

     

    Macdougal accented a large bribe to find another man guilty as the man hung from the gallows tree an old woman confronted Macdougal pointing at him she yelled her fury at his vile corruption. She was the grandmother of the woman the lord’s son had killed and a powerful witch she cursed him that he may never rest until the injustice he has caused had been righted a thousand fold

    And James MacDonald has walked the earth ever since attempting to right wrongs wherever he finds them. He has been seen to die dozens of times only to return years even decades later at the foot of the gallows tree where first he was cursed. His formidable strength combined with his ability to withstand and recover from immense physical damage make him a force to be reckoned with and his berserk fury is a thing of legend his knowledge of the law is encyclopedic he is precedent

  7. Not really the best one I could come up with still needs work

     

    Valentine Gattonotte the Third. Gentleman adventurer Val to his friends night cat to his trembling enemies the gattonotte family have been adventurers explores spies pirates and thieves. In every age the family has made a name for its self.

     

    Val’s parents disappeared 18 years ago doing what they loved best tracking through the Himalayas racing to prevent evil forces from obtaining a mystical treasure.

     

    Val was raised by his grand father a legendary figure in his native Italy who had waged a single-handed war against the fascists for much of the thirties and forties.

     

    After years spent traveling the world learning from the finest teachers in various fields.

    Val has taken to the life as a costumed crime fighter opposing injustice just as his grand father did and searching for adventure like his parents.

     

    A master of martial arts he is a skilled fencer and carries a saber with him Val has power he is unaware of a mystical amulet.

    The final gift his mother gave him before his parent’s final tragic expedition.

     

    The carved jet amulet with a picture of a cat he wears around his neck at all times gives him inordinate luck and seemingly 9 lives.

     

     

    He wears along black leather coat with armored panels pattern of two cats pouncing at each other across his back. Under that he wears high leather boots with armored shin guards black trousers and open black shirt, which proudly displays his jet amulet and utility belt filled with useful tools for his trade..

     

     

    Val always leaves a calling card whenever he foils a crime a business card with the image of a black cat against a full moon with passing clouds Night Cat and the family motto in Latin the English translation of which is “at night the cat is kingâ€

    Val is a playboy and bon vivant witha love of thrills and high stakes.

  8. whats more fun is to think of origin stories for each of the new names

     

    Personal favorites

    Sub surfer

     

    It all began as an advertising campaign for a certain deli based fast food chain that commissioned an inventor to develop an 8-foot flying hoagie. The company hired a world-class surfer and amateur martial artist to ride it in various parades and major sporting events. One of these events was attacked by a super villain team the sub surfer heroically used his flying grinder to rescue civilians and harass the villains until the local; super team arrived they where so impressed by the sub surfers heroics they asked him to join and now with the help of the inventor who created his po'boy he fight crime equipped with a range of deli themed gadgets his met ball bombs and pickle shrikes are much feared by criminals.

     

    Strange mariner

    Some time in the 1780s a pirate vessel boarded a Spanish galleon laden with a huge supply of gold as they sailed back towards Jamaica loaded with there booty they where caught up in a powerful tropical storm that threw them off course and they drifted into the dreaded Bermuda triangle.

     

    Almost two centuries later the ship returned to land this time arriving in New York the sails where mere tatters but the ship acted as if they where full an intact and whilst only one member of crew remained the captain at the heel the rest of the duties where ebbing performed as if by invisible hands. The captain William Warley had returned from some unknown land a changed man

     

    He possessed great mystical powers, knowledge of lost magic’s and occult lore. Now able to summon the ghostly phantoms of his crew to his service and chart a course for his ship to any body of water anywhere. He believed he had been sent back to atone for his sins as a pirate defeating those who would now continue his nefarious trade both on land and sea. He is aided by the massive wealth of the Spanish galleon still somewhere in his ships hold.

  9. This is my inaugural post to the forum so I hope its not to dumb an idea and I know it’s not what you’re looking for but I thought it was intresting enough to share.

     

     

    How about a fake suit one composed entirely of force fields and holograms. the strength is produced by repulsor beams. Armour by a protective force field with anti gravity capability for flight.

     

    And of course because its holographic you have stealth capabilities built in and you don’t have to appear as a power Armour you could look like a demon or Norse god or what ever.

     

    I kind of see it as being the space suit of an alien anthropologist sent to earth to investigate the various cultures. With Force fields for protection, anti gravity for flight and holographic array for stealth and changing appearance a universal translator for interaction and some sort of compact alien weaponry for defense. Also environmental support etc. the whole unit contained in a utility belt type arrangement a human being could hide under there cloths.

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