I do have some quibbles: First, Ron and Suzie do still need to breathe, and to eat and sleep. This is established in issue 4. Also in issue 4, we see that Bernard does in fact require a space suit, so presumably does not have Life Support.
My main problems, however, are with Zodon. Extra Limbs, sold-back Running, then Running bought through his chair, no Distinctive features? I'm sorry, but he's the archetypal example of "A Disadvantage that doesn'tlimit the character isn't worth any points." He seem to be a myesthenia gravis victim, or possibly a quadraplegic, but he get *no* points for these, as his hoverchair provides him with full mobility and manipulation, thus he suffers no limitation from that condition. If anything, he'd have "DF: Big-headed kid in a hoverchair." The chair is *not* removable as far as we've seen; it appears to be directly connected to Zodon, and thus is not a focus. Oh, and he masses approximately 150 kg with his chair. PS: Supervillain is fine, but not on a 14 or less; he's brilliant, but he's still only five. He and Victor von Fogg are capable and skilled for their age, but that's the key: For their age. I'd give Zodon an 11- at most. ALso, he has "Images," in a cone, "only to create light" from his chair's headlamp.