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Hi,This is an NPC for my San Fransisco Teen Heroes game. He is the Police Captain that the heroes have just met up with.Captain Spencer SpicePlayer:

Val Char Cost
13 STR 3
14 DEX 12
15 CON 10
13 BODY 6
18 INT 8
15 EGO 10
15 PRE 5
12 COM 1
8 PD 7
5 ED 2
3 SPD 6
8 REC 4
30 END 0
30 STUN 2
6" RUN02" SWIM02 1/2" LEAP0Characteristics Cost: 76
Cost Power END
2 Observant: +1 PER with Sight Group 0
Powers Cost: 2
Cost Martial Arts Maneuver
Basic Defense Training
4 1) Martial Strike: 1/2 Phase, +0 OCV, +2 DCV, 4 1/2d6 Strike
4 2) Martial Block: 1/2 Phase, +2 OCV, +2 DCV, Block, Abort
4 3) Martial Disarm: 1/2 Phase, -1 OCV, +1 DCV, Disarm; 23 STR to Disarm
Martial Arts Cost: 12
Cost Skill
2 Animal Handler (Canines) 12-
3 Bureaucratics 12-
3 CK: San Fransisco 13-
1 Combat Driving 8-
5 +1 with Ranged Combat
5 +1 with HTH Combat
3 Criminology 13-
1 CuK: SuperHumans 8-
3 Deduction 13-
1 Forensic Medicine 8-
3 High Society 12-
5 Interrogation 13-
2 KS: Criminal Law And Procedure 11-
2 KS: The Law Enforcement World 11-
3 Paramedics 13-
2 PS: Police Officer (or the like) 11-
3 Shadowing 13-
3 Streetwise 12-
2 WF: Small Arms
Skills Cost: 52
Cost Perk
6 Fringe Benefit: Local Police Powers, Police captain
1 Fringe Benefit: Weapon Permit
6 Contact: Commissioner (Contact has access to major institutions, Contact has useful Skills or resources, Good relationship with Contact) 12-
7 Contact: Local F.B.I. Director (Contact has access to major institutions, Contact has significant Contacts of his own, Contact has useful Skills or resources, Good relationship with Contact) 12-
Perks Cost: 20
Cost Equipment END
.38 Special (S&W Model 10): Killing Attack - Ranged 1d6+1 (20 Active Points); STR Minimum 7 (STR Min. Cannot Add/Subtract Damage; -1), OAF (-1), 6 Charges (-3/4), Real Weapon (-1/4), Beam (-1/4) [6]
Equipment costs shown above are for reference only, and are not included in Total Cost.
Val Disadvantages
5 Age: 40+
15 Hunted: Department of Justice 8- (Mo Pow, NCI, PC has a Public ID or is otherwise very easy to find, Watching)
20 Hunted: Organized Crime 8- (Mo Pow, PC has a Public ID or is otherwise very easy to find, Harshly Punish)
0 Normal Characteristic Maxima
15 Psychological Limitation: Tough on Crime (Common, Strong)
5 Psychological Limitation: Feeling his age. (Uncommon, Moderate)
15 Social Limitation: Public Identity Frequently (11-), Major
Disadvantage Points: 75

Base Points: 75Experience Required: 12Total Experience Available: 12Experience Unspent: 0Total Character Cost: 162

Height: 1.76 m Hair: Silver
Weight: 86.00 kg Eyes: Pale Blue
Appearance: Personality: Quote:Background: Captain Spencer Spice started out as a beat cop in San Fransisco during the 1930's. He worked up the ladder to Police Captain partly because of his tough stance on crime and his solid reputation. He has been Captain for about 5 years now since his predeccesor retired and he has worked hard on corruption and organized crime. So much so that some Crime Lords have taken out contracts out on him. Now that superhumans have arrived on the scene in San Fransisco Spice is not really sure how to handle this new development. He has recently encountered a group of self-proclaimed 'superheroes' calling themselves the Citizen League which he secretly hopes will help him protect his city. He is also concerned that street crime may turn into supercrime and create even more trouble. Powers/Tactics: Campaign Use: 
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Re: Please critique this character

 

I like the character, too.. My only comments are that his Martial Art might be more appropriate as "Dirty Infighting", and that he has no Conversation/Persuation skills (I think they called it "horse trading" back then) or contacts "on the street".. y'know, criminals who've gone straight after prison who've got useful skills (a forger, a bookie, etc). Possibly shave some points off his int (down to 15 or 14), buy some resistance and extra Pre for def (Stubborn), just for flavor. Give him the Disad Reputation, probly a big one, cuz anyone in city government for the past 30 years is going to know his M.O. Favors from people in the past and present administration would be appropriate, a high Knowlege skill of the history of the city, and maby a KS: Where the Bodies are Buried.

 

Possibly a Dnpc, a retired semi crippled cop who he looks after from a sense of responsiblility (maby injured by an up and coming supervillian?) ,or a follower if you've got the points and want him to be more useful than a plot hook.

 

Give him a pair of brass knuckles or a billy club for when things get sticky, give him a K-9 follower (or let him summon one by calling his Handicapped DNPC) and don't let him take crap from anyone, cuz he's been there and done that, and by the book only applies when you're cooking!

 

 

 

-CraterMaker

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