OddHat Posted March 3, 2006 Report Share Posted March 3, 2006 Re: My Summer Vacation: A Short Story Thanks for allowing me to indulge my narcissism again. That's what we're here for. Well, that and talking about gaming. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zornwil Posted March 4, 2006 Report Share Posted March 4, 2006 Re: My Summer Vacation: A Short Story That is a really good story, Treb, effective, thanks for sharing it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet Posted March 5, 2006 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2006 Re: My Summer Vacation: A Short Story Thanks, Zorn! I'll try to keep the stories coming. I'm enjoying writing this kind of stuff. Guess I'm just getting in touch with my feminine side. Next up: Trebuchet writes a "bodice ripper" romance novel featuring a roguish hunk as the infuriating yet oddly likeable love interest. See the shirt torn from the hero's rippling torso! See the heroine's blouse torn revealingly (but not too revealingly!)! See the dramatic horse chase through the stormy Scottish moors/New Mexican high chapparal/Irish countryside before the hero catches the heaving-bosomed heroine and she bravely defends her virtue for all of thirty seconds before she surrenders to her hidden desires! See the starcrossed couple get really wet in an oddly PG-13 sex scene! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ghost-angel Posted March 5, 2006 Report Share Posted March 5, 2006 Re: My Summer Vacation: A Short Story Thanks, Zorn! I'll try to keep the stories coming. I'm enjoying writing this kind of stuff. Guess I'm just getting in touch with my feminine side. Next up: Trebuchet writes a "bodice ripper" romance novel featuring a roguish hunk as the infuriating yet oddly likeable love interest. See the shirt torn from the hero's rippling torso! See the heroine's blouse torn revealingly (but not too revealingly!)! See the dramatic horse chase through the stormy Scottish moors/New Mexican high chapparal/Irish countryside before the hero catches the heaving-bosomed heroine and she bravely defends her virtue for all of thirty seconds before she surrenders to her hidden desires! See the starcrossed couple get really wet in an oddly PG-13 sex scene! "And that's when he was strung up your honor. No sir, I don't remember who brought the rope..." The story was really good there, you captured emotion without making it sound contrived. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kristopher Posted March 6, 2006 Report Share Posted March 6, 2006 Re: My Summer Vacation: A Short Story It's good stuff, Treb. Thanks for posting it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet Posted October 7, 2006 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2006 Re: My Summer Vacation: A Short Story Bump. Corrected some minor spelling and grammatical errors. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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