Jeff

I think counting it against DC limits is just the thing to do.

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It'll be vulnerable to mental sense group Flashes, Darkness, Invisibility, etc. Since it's an unusual sense group, there aren't the free adders you can get basing it on (e.g.) the sight group. It's going to be subject to normal range modifiers.

Mental Powers are generally line of sight, yes. However, I'm not sure why on earth this would be defined as a mental power (for that game-mechanical purpose). I take it it's being defined as a sense in the mental sense group, but that's another thing entirely and doesn't carry a line of sight restriction any more than Mind Scan does.

I don't see a problem with it at all. It doesn't replicate Mind Scan, in that it does take range mods and so won't be usable across the planet like Mind Scan is. It's also a very natural power for a psi to have. I don't see any reason to limit it to line of sight, not when it's not a sight-group power. (If it were, it'd get many of those adders free.)

It's not to do with the game mechanics - I think other posters have those covered well - but tapping the nexus of energies of a Demonlair for a magical boost seems altogether too much like asking Dr. Destroyer for some powered armor design help or Teleios for a boost to your physique or mental prowess. Great fun for a diabolical GM, mind you - but Asking For It on the part of the players.

I think it'd be enough just not to include some effects in any given style and make sure some limitations are universal within it. Let the variety fill out as much as you like otherwise. Similarly, I don't think a minimum quantity of spells in a style will ensure that it will have enough to stand on its own, not if they don't manage to hit crucial functions between them. Just make sure they cover those when you're writing up the spells for each style.

I wouldn't say abusive. But it will have some odd implications. Folks with Affects Desolid attacks will somehow be able to hit someone who's just fast where hyper-accurate light-speed supersmart homing missiles can't. You're not going to be able to carry someone when you're running like that unless you buy Affect Real World on STR.

Have you considered DCV levels for the effect instead of Desolidification? They're the usual way to be hard to hit, and the limitations involved seem to have the effect of just making Desolidification work like lots of DCV levels would in the first place.

Could you say a bit more about the magic system(s) in use, particularly about how magic is bought for the character? If they have to pay for spells normally, I'm not sure how much reason there is for a maximum number of spells in a given style. If they're paying a flat amount for access to all the spells of the style as in some of the FH magic systems, it's quite another story.

It's hard to come up with an origin story with a very close connection to plain magic force. Maybe the thing to do is to embrace the symbolic connections. Gold is the symbol of wealth, and wealth is the form of power most familiar throughout human history. It can move things without the crass need for direct physical contact, much less sweaty labor, remaining pristine in its beauty and remoteness. That sort of context might make altamaros' origin proposal more suitable - the Golden Crown is created from the corrupt power of wealth itself in a forge of pain and death.

I can see a Bone Crown. In ancient times, priests of Krim searched the land to find the patriarch of the largest, happiest living family. They were all taken and imprisoned. One by one, they were tortured and killed in the presence of the loving patriarch, and their corpses were brought back in undeath to sing to him night and day of what they were and his utter failure to save them. In the end, all that was left was a horde of cackling undead and one tormented old man. The final tortures for him were almost an afterthought, but they still made it last months. When he was finally dead, his spirit was bound to his skull to bear witness to centuries of atrocities. The Bone Crown was crafted from that skull. Most likely, it would be capable of summoning and commanding the undead - Takofanes most certainly excepted - and maybe manipulating living bone as well.

As far as that goes, it's sounding like KS's, Deduction, INT, and PER roll bonuses - just in vast quantities. That's particularly fitting since you'd want those for Batman quite apart from anything to do with picking up danger. Deduction, KS: Joker, various KS's and/or SC's - all things you can't model Bats without already. I can't see this as an example of Danger Sense at all, much less a good example that he's got to have it. (I'm not married to the notion he can't - I just think he's the world's best candidate for getting away without it on account of quite a bit else.) A good example of Deduction at work, possibly with complementary rolls of Tactics and KS: Thugs. Can't exactly tell you you're feeling wrong there, but I can say it's not a vibe I get. Deduction and KS: Superman (ya, he's got that too - he knows the man) would lead to an expectation; a PER roll would recognize the voice. I can't see this as simply the result of information he's not in danger, either. "Not in danger" plus "someone's here" doesn't get you to "it's just Supes" - not without things like Deduction and PER rolls on the part of the character or canny inference on the part of the player. And, alas, we can't model Batman saying he must only be played by canny players although that'd probably be better than 1000 points in skills and talents to get him right. Funny thing - in a heroic game, you could never afford the vast wealth of skills and PER roll bonuses that would account for his ability plausibly to get away without buying Danger Sense. For Batman, I think Danger Sense is a bit of a cheat or a temptation to be controlled, since it may lead you to model the character without all the skills he should have and an awareness of their full application. He's got the Really Popular Character Perk for that.

The worry about cumulative Healing is that it would make damage pretty meaningless after a short while out of combat. But if you're not worried much about it, you can take advantages to increase the frequency with which Healing may be usefully re-applied. It's +1/4 per step down from daily, so +1 1/2 gets you down to once per turn. FH allows AE radius to be a "voice radius", anyone within earshot, which should be another element you're after. So you might have something like: 1d6 standard Healing, reapplicable after 1 turn (+1 1/2), AE- voice radius (+1), extra time - 1 turn (-1 1/4), incantations (-1/4), or 14 real points if not for the likely additional limitations. Since you've got a low base point level and you're piling on advantages, you might opt to get a Healing that covers several characteristics at once. +1/2, for instance, would do STUN and BODY together, for much faster BODY Healing than standard Healing offers.

Should this be a new thread yet? I think you might be underestimating Batman's PER roll there. I figure he's a good candidate for INT 23, paying past NCM or not. But more than that, chuckles has a PER roll that's boosted well above that, maybe from levels, maybe from the enhanced PER roll route, maybe both, and he's likely got a host of skills a GM would allow as complementary to PER rolls under those circumstances. A specific Danger Sense probably isn't necessary for him - the PER rolls are routinely high enough that any natural skill vs. skill contest is a losing proposition for the ambushers.