This is my character for a new 5th ed revised campaign. opinions, questions advise?
Alternate IDs: John Fredericks
Player: Stephan Richter
Val Char Roll Notes
15 STR 12- HTH Damage 3d6 END 
26 DEX 14- OCV 9 DCV 9
20 CON 13-
11 BODY 11-
15 INT 12- PER Roll 12-
10 EGO 11- ECV: 3
13 PRE 12- PRE Attack: 2 1/2d6
10 COM 11-
10 REC Run: 7"
40 END Swim: 2"
29 STUN Leap: 3"
DF: Alien monster (Easily Concealed; Noticed and Recognizable; Detectable By Commonly-Used Senses) 5
Hunted: ALIEN HATE GROUP 8- (Less Pow, Harshly Punish) 5
Hunted: US Government 8- (Mo Pow, NCI, Watching) 10
Hunted: EVIL HIGH TECH VILLAIN GROUP 8- (Mo Pow, Capture) 15
Normal Characteristic Maxima 20
Psychological Limitation: Hunting Mysterious High Tech villain group (Uncommon, Strong) 10
Physical Limitation: Suffers blackouts (Infrequently, Greatly Impairing) [Notes: He blacks out and wakes in strange places with no memory of going there. When he wakes up , he feels invigorated. He is wearing the suit when he wakes up.] 10
Psychological Limitation: Code Against Killing (Common, Moderate) 10
Reputation: Alien Monster, 8- 5
Reputation: Top Material scientist, 11- (Known Only To A Small Group) 5
Social Limitation: Secret ID (Frequently, Major) 15
Social Limitation: Subject to Orders (Occasionally, Major) 10
Susceptibility: using suit, 3d6 END DRAIN per Turn (Very Common) 30
Base : 200
Disads : +150
XP Spent : +0
Total = 350
49 : Characteristics Cost
230 + Powers Cost
71 + Martial Arts/Skills/Perks/Talents Cost
350 = Total Cost
Personality/Motivation: He feels guilty about not being there to protect Julie. He wants vengeance on the Villains who killed her.
Julie wants vengeance on the villains as well. She still does not know exactly what happened in the lab. she is usually only vaguely aware of the world around her.
Pts. Power/Skill/Perk/Talent END
32 LIGHT ATTACK: Multipower, 80-point reserve, (80 Active Points); all slots HALF POWER IN DARKNESS (-1), OIF Durable (-1/2)
3u 1) LASER FLASH:Sight and Radio Groups Flash 15d6 (80 Active Points) 8
3u 2) LASER AP BLAST: EB 10 1/2d6, Armor Piercing (+1/2) (79 Active Points); Beam (-1/4) 8
3u 3) LASER BLAST: EB 16d6 (80 Active Points); No Knockback (-1/4) 8
Liquid Crystal Power Armor, all slots HALF POWER IN DARKNESS (-1), OIF Durable (-1/2)
16 1) +40 STR (40 Active points) 4
8 2) +2 SPD (20 Active Points)
8 3) +10 BODY (20 Active Points)
17 4) +14 DEX (42 Active Points)
20 5) Endurance Reserve (100 END, 40 REC) (50 Active Points)
4 6) Lack Of Weakness (-10) for POWER ARMOR (10 Active Points)
3 7) Energy Damage Reduction, 25% (10 Active Points); ONLY VS LIGHT BASED ATTACKS. (-3/4)
22 8) Flight 15", Position Shift, x8 Noncombat, No Turn Mode (+1/4) (56 Active Points) 6
4 9) Sight Group Flash Defense (10 points) (10 Active Points)
8 10) LS (Safe Environment: Zero Gravity; Safe in High Pressure; Safe in High Radiation; Safe in Intense Cold; Safe in Intense Heat; Safe in Low Pressure/Vacuum; Self-Contained Breathing) (20 Active Points)
6 11) IR Perception (Sight Group), Discriminatory, Analyze (15 Active Points)
6 12) UV Perception (Sight Group), Discriminatory, Analyze (15 Active Points)
8 13) N-Ray Perception (Sight Group), Discriminatory, Analyze (20 Active Points)
3 14) Mental Defense (10 points total) (8 Active Points)
56 Armor (20 PD/25 ED), Hardened (+1/4) (84 Active Points); OIF (-1/2) 0
3 Criminology 12-
3 KS: Criminal Law 12-
3 Forensic Medicine 12-
3 Paramedics 12-
3 KS: Police Procedure 12-
6 PS: MATERIAL SCIENTIST 15-
3 Streetwise 12-
6 1) SS: Bio-Chemistry 16- (7 Active Points)
6 2) SS: Chemistry 16- (7 Active Points)
6 3) SS: MATERIAL SCIENCE 16- (7 Active Points)
5 4) SS: Nuclear Chemistry 15- (6 Active Points)
5 5) SS: Physics 15- (6 Active Points)
3 Contact: "MR. LYNCH" (Contact has access to major institutions) 11-
7 Fringe Benefit: Security Clearance, Top Man
3 Bump Of Direction
Height: 1.87 m Hair: Brown
Weight: 115.00 kg Eyes: blue
Appearance: The power armor is a mostly midnight blue Crystalline suit. It looks like a 6'6" alien. There is something about it that is just 'wrong' somehow.
John is a Top Man Scientist for the Government. He also is a Professor at(insert University). His lab assistant, Julie, was a genius. He could only keep up with her research due to his years of knowledge. They were working on a way to make a smart material that could go from liquid to solid in an instant. During an important part of an experiment he was called away by the Government to analyze some alien material. While he was gone, Julie made a break through with the material they were using, a dark blue crystalline matrix. She found out the material could be controlled by thought. She stored a copy of the discovery in a special folder on the server that she and John used for notes when he had to be out of the lab. While she was testing the material while wearing the cerebral enhancer, a High Tech Villain group attacked the lab to steal the research. During the fight, she gets hit with a massive charge of electricity, causing the cerebral enhancer to overload and transfer her mind into the crystalline matrix and kills her body. It also fries all the computers in the lab, erasing all of their notes. The villains leave as what they came to steal has been "destroyed".
2 weeks later John returns from 'vacation'. He finds out about the attack and death of his lab assistant. He checks the lab and finds the blue liquid crystal they were using has solidified into a lump of crystal. He is told that due to the attack and near destruction of his lab during his "absence", it will be a couple of months before he can do any more research. He checks his email finds one from Julie telling him to check the folder, she discovered something. With her notes, he is able to recreate the cerebral enhancer and control the crystal. During his time off, he analyzes the material as something has changed about it. He discovers it has the ability to focus or diffuse light. He decides to use the material to make a suit of power armor to hunt down the villains and bring them to justice. To hide his appearance, he has the suit look like a monstrous crystalline Alien. He starts researching how to be a detective. This has caused his science skills to drop as he is not maintaining them as well as he used to. In testing the suit, he starts to suffer from occasional black outs. He wakes up in weird places, in the suit and feels invigorated.
During his blackouts is when Julie takes over. She has been trying to figure out where she is. Due to the sensory abilities of the material, she is seeing the world very differently than she did before. She is unaware she is dead and she is on earth. She thinks she is on an alien world.
Powers/Tactics: The suit gives him control of light. So far he has figured out how to use the sensory abilities of the material. He has figured out that the material makes a great crystal to focus light thru. He has created a simple laser blast, a very focused laser blast that can cut thru armor and the ability to flash someone by shining it into their eyes. He recently discovered a way to fly in the armor by manipulating the magnetic field of the Earth. The cerebral enhancer has the side effect of improving his hand eye coordination and balance, as well as speeding up his perceptual speed. Due to the base crystalline matrix of the material, it is very strong. Using this, he is able to lift much heavier objects than he originally could.