teh bunneh Posted November 21, 2008 Report Share Posted November 21, 2008 Hey folks! I'm writing up a Steampunky adventure for publication and I need someone to take a look at it and see if there are any giant, glaring holes that should be filled. I'd like someone to read it with a GM's eye, mostly to tell me if this is an adventure that they could run. What parts need fleshing out, what parts need to be re-written, what things are missing. I'm not worried about stats at the moment (in fact, I haven't even written most of the stats up yet). Just want to know about flow and playability. Any volunteers? Thanks! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CoreBrute Posted November 21, 2008 Report Share Posted November 21, 2008 Re: Need a proofreader (Steampunk) I've always liked steampunk, and would love to give your adventure a once over. and then another over. And then two more overs until I memorised it and then use it myself... Ignore the last bit. But yeah, would love to read it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teh bunneh Posted November 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2008 Re: Need a proofreader (Steampunk) Cool, thanks. Anyone else? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Querysphinx Posted November 22, 2008 Report Share Posted November 22, 2008 Re: Need a proofreader (Steampunk) Sure. I'll look it over. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Psylint Posted November 23, 2008 Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 Re: Need a proofreader (Steampunk) Count me in Bunny. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doc Democracy Posted November 23, 2008 Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 Re: Need a proofreader (Steampunk) Happy to cast an eye over this if you want another person. Doc Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gnaskar Posted November 23, 2008 Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 Re: Need a proofreader (Steampunk) and me too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roth Posted November 23, 2008 Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 Re: Need a proofreader (Steampunk) I'm up for it if you need some one else. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teh bunneh Posted November 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 Re: Need a proofreader (Steampunk) Count me in Bunny. Happy to cast an eye over this if you want another person. and me too. I'm up for it if you need some one else. If you guys PM me your email addresses, I'll send you a copy of it later today or tomorrow. Thanks! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hooligan x Posted November 26, 2008 Report Share Posted November 26, 2008 Re: Need a proofreader (Steampunk) I can read some proof. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Psylint Posted November 27, 2008 Report Share Posted November 27, 2008 Re: Need a proofreader (Steampunk) Hey Bunny, Just sent you the redline. Peace Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheQuestionMan Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 Re: Need a proofreader (Steampunk) I cannot proof read, but I can kibitz with the best of them. Cheers QM Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teh bunneh Posted December 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 Re: Need a proofreader (Steampunk) Whoops, forgot all about this thread. Thanks to the people who helped! I sent in the adventure about a week ago. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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