Queen Nightmara, Champions Complete Version

[steriaca]

Warning: This character write-up is complicated to the max. It took me a long time to convert it and add things to it to satisfy myself, and give her a 'Queen Berly/Queen Metalica" vive to her, and I still not exactly satisfied. She is meant to be over powerful, but still have enough weaknesses to her. Comments and opinions welcomed.

 

As always, this is a work in progress.

 

States

 

Queen Nightmara

Value   Char   Cost   Roll   Notes

   13      STR       3      12-  Lift: 150kg. Damage: 2 1/2 d6.

   23      DEX     26      14-

   23      CON    13      14-

   26      INT      16      14-  PER Roll: 14-

   26      EGO    16      14-

   30      PRE     20     15-  PRE Attack: 6d6

 

     9      OCV    30

     9      DCV    30

     9      OMCV 18

     9      DMCV 18

     6      SPD     40            Phases: 2,4,6,8,10,12

 

    30     PD       28             rPD/PD: 30/30 -6 Damage Negation

    30     ED       28             rED/ED: 30/30 -6 Damage Negation

    30     REC    26

    80     END    12

    20     BODY 10

    60     STUN  20

Char Total: 354

 

Powers

Cost   Powers/END Cost

 180   Back For More Suffering: Healing BODY 10d6, Resurrection, Standard Effect (30 BODY Healed), Decreased Re-use Duration (Each Turn: +1 1/2), Ranged (+1/2), Indirect (Source Always Charater, Path Not Direct: + 1/2), Transdimentinal (Any Dimention: +1),Focus (Must Have The Godstone Of The Magical Girl To Be Reserected In Her Posesion, OAF, Not Expendable, Difficult To Obtain [Must Kill Said Magical Girl To Make Her Godstone Appear In The First Place, Unless She Already Killed Her, Which Then It Is On Hand For Her To Use]: -1 1/4), Limited Power (Only Against Magical Girls Who's Powers Are Based On The Godstones, And She Must Of Killed Them, Or Killed Them In The Past: -1/4), Resurrection Only (-1/2)/END Cost 54

 

  170   Corupt Godstone: Major Body Transformation 6d6 (Magical Girl To Magical Girl Who's Apperance Pleases Queen Nightmara And Form Repersents Her Corupt Emotion), Indirect (Source Always Charater, Path Not Direct: + 1/2), Transdimentinal (Any Dimention: +1), Limited Target (Godstone Based Magical Girls Only: -1), Extra Time (Full Phase: -1/2), Focus (Must Have The Godstone Of Magical Girl To Transform, OAF, Not Expended, Difficult To Obtain: -1 1/4), AND

 

            Major Mind Transformation 6d6 (Magical Girl To Magical Girl Who Is Loyal To Queen Nightmara And Who's Temperment Matches A Dark Emotion), Standard Effect (What Is Rolled On The Severe Body Transfromation), Indirect (Source Always Charater, Path Not Direct: + 1/2), Transdimentinal (Any Dimention: +1),Trigger (When Severe Body Transfromation Is Activated, No Time Action, Resets Automaticly: +1), Limited Target (Godstone Based Magical Girls Only: -1), Focus (Must Have The Godstone Of Magical Girl To Transform, OAF, Not Expended, Dificult To Obtain: -1 1/4), Linked (To Severe Body Transformation), AND

 

            Severe Soul Transformation 6d6 (Magical Girl To Magical Girl Who's Nature Is Compatable With Queen Nightmara's Wishes), Standard Effect (What Is Rolled On The Severe Body Transformation), Trigger (When Severe Body Transformation Is Activated, No Time Action, Resets Automaticly: +1), Limited Target (Godstone Based Magical Girls Only: -1), Focus (Must Have The Godstone Of Magical Girl To Transform, OAF, Not Expended, Dificult To Ibtain: -1 1/4), Linked (To Severe Body Transformation)/END Cost: 57

 

   60   The Terrible Magic Of Dark Emotions, Base Spells: 60 point Multipower

   12v  1) Dark Emotions Intencified: Aid 2d6, Expanded Effect (All Powers With The Special Effect Of Dark Emotions: +4)/END Cost: 6

    11v 2) Dark Emotion Blast 1: Blast 9d6, Variable Special Effect (Dark Emotions: +1/4)/END Cost: 6

    10v 3) Dark Emotion Blast 2: Blast 3d6, AVLD (NND - All Or Nothing, Being Unable To Feel Emotions: +1), Does BODY (+1), Variable Special Effect (Dark Emotions: +1/4)/END Cost: 5

    11v 4) Direct Feeding Off Of Dark Emotions: Drain END, 2d6, AVLD (NND - All Or Nothing, Being Unable To Feel Emotions: +1), Reduced Endurance (0 END: +1/2), Variable Special Effect (Dark Emotions: +1/4)/END Cost: 0

    10v 5) Wrappings Of Dark Emotions: Entangle, 4d6, 4PD, 4ED, Variable Special Effect (Dark Emotions: +1/4)/END Cost: 5

    10v 6) Murderous Dark Emotion Blast 1:Ranged Killing Attack 1d6, AVLD (NND - All Or Nothing, Unable To Feel Emotions: +1), Does BODY (+1), Variable Special Effects (Dark Emotions: +1/4)/END Cost: 5

    11v 7) Murderous Dark Emotion Blast 2: Ranged Killing Attack 3d6, Variable Special Effect (Dark Emotions: +1/4)/END Cost: 5

    11v 8) Dark Emotion Control: Mind Control 9d6, Telepathic (+1/4), Set Effect (Only To Cause Target To Feel A Dark Emotional State: -1/2)/END Cost: 5

      8v 9) Dark Emotional Reading: Telepathy, Empathy (-1/2)/END Cost: 6

 

    35   Dark Emotion Blast 1 Increse (+ Slot 2 Of Multipower): Blast +7d6, Variable Special Effects (Dark Emotions: +1/4), Limited Power (Useless In Areas Associated With Good Emotions: -1/4)/END Cost: +4

 

    39   Dark Emotion Blast 2 Increse (+ Slot 3 Of Multipower): Blast +3d6, AVLD (NND - Unable To Feal Emotions: +1), Does BODY (+1), Variable Special Effects (Dark Emotions: +1/4), Limited Power (Useless In Areas Associated With Good Emotions: -1/4)/END Cost: +5

 

   44   Direct Feeding Off Dark Emotions Increse (+ Slot 4 Of Multipower): Drain END +2d6, AVLD (NND - Unable To Feal Emotions: +1), Reduced Endurance (0 END: +1/2), Variable Special Effects (Dark Emotions: +1/4), Limited Power (Useless In Areas Associated With Good Emotions: -1/4)/END Cost: +0

 

   45   Murderous Dark Emotion Blast 1 Increse (+ Slot 6 Of Multipower): Ranged Killing Attack +3d6, Variable SPecial Effect (Dark Emotions: +1/4), Limited Power (Useless In Areas Associated With Good Emotions: -1/4)/END Cost: +6

 

   39   Murderous Dark Emotion Blast 2 Increse (+ Slot 7 Of Multipower): Ranged Killing Attack +1d6, AVLD (NND - Unable To Feal Emotions: +1), Does BODY (+1), Varable Special Effect (Dark Emotions: +1/4), Limited Power (Useless In Areas Associated With Good Emotions: -1/4)/END Cost: +5

 

   32   Dark Emotion Control Increse (+ Slot 8 Of Multipower): Mind Control +9d6, Telepathic (+1/4), Set Effects (Only To Inflict Dark Emotions Upon Target: -1/2), Limited Power (Useless In Areas Associated With Good Emotions: -1/4)/END Cost: +6

 

   26   Dark Emotinal Reading Increse (+ Slot 9 Of Multipower): Telepathy +9d6, Empathy (-1/2), Limited Power (Useless In Areas Associated With Good Emotions: -1/4)/END Cost: +5

 

    48   Sometimes Bigger Is Better: Area Of Effect (8m Radius: +1/2) on Blast 9d6 AND Blast +7d6 (basicly Slot 2 in multipower), Reduced Endurance (0 END On Naked Advantage: +1/2), Limited Power (Only When Using 40 Points Of Growth Or Larger: -1/4)/END Cost +0

 

    27   Sometimes Bigger Is Better: Area Of Effect (8m Radius: +1/2) on Blast 3d6 AND Blast +3d6 (basicly Slot 3 in multipower), Reduced Endurance (0 END On Naked Advantage: +1/2), Limited Power (Only When Using 40 Points Of Growth Or Larger: -1/4)/END Cost +0

 

    22   Sometimes Bigger Is Better: Area Of Effect (8m Radius: +1/2) on Ranged Killing Attack 3d6 AND Ranged Killing Attack +3d6 (basicly Slot 6 in multipower), Reduced Endurance (0 END On Naked Advantage: +1/2), Limited Power (Only When Using 40 Points Of Growth Or Larger: -1/4)/END Cost +0

 

    19   Sometimes Bigger Is Better: Area Of Effect (8m Radius: +1/2) on Ranged Killing Attack 1d6 AND Ranged Killing Attack +1d6 (basicly Slot 7 in multipower), Reduced Endurance (0 END On Naked Advantage: +1/2), Limited Power (Only When Using 40 Points Of Growth Or Larger: -1/4)/END Cost +0

 

    73   Blasts From The Eye Of Darkness: Indirect (Eye Of Darkness, +1/4), Transdimentinal (Same Dimention Where The Eye Of Darkness Is: +1/2) On Blast 9d6 AND Blast +7d6 (basicly Slot 2 in multipower), Reduced Endurance (0 END On Naked Advantage: +1/2), Physical Manifestation (Eye Of Darkness: -1/4), Limited Power (Unable To Use Naked Advantage When Using ANY Points Of Growth: -1/4)/END Cost +0

 

   112   Her Physical Size Is Inverse To The Size Of Her Heart: Growth (+25 Points), Reduced Endurance (0 END: +1/2), Limited Power (Unable To Use Power In Areas Of Extreme Good Emotions: -1/4) AND

            Enormous Growth (+25 Points), Reduced Endurance (0 END: +1/2), Limited Power (Unable To Use Power In Areas Of Moderate Good Emotions: -1/2) AND

            Huge Growth (+40 Points), Reduced Endurance (0 END: +1/2), Limited Power (Only In Areas Associated With Dark Emotions: -3/4) AND

            Gigantic Growth (+30 Points), Renduced Endurance (0 END: +1/2), Limited Power (Only In Areas Of Extreme Dark Emotions: -1)

            (See seprate chart for bonuses)

            /END Cost +0

 

     23   Huge Hands: Area Of Effect (1m Radius: +1/4) for up to 58 STR, Reduced Endurance (0 END On Naked Advantage: +1/2), Limited Power (Only When Using 90 Points of Growth Or Larger: -1/4)/END Cost +0

 

     29   Huge Hands: Area Of Effect (2m Radius: +1/4) for up to 75 STR, Reduced Endurance (0 END On Naked Advantage: +1/2), Limited Power (Only When Using 120 Points Of Growth: -1/4)/END Cost +0

 

    18   Strong Protective Magic: Hardened (+1/4), Impenetrable (+1/4) and Resistant (+1/2) for up to PD 30, Limited Power (Not Against Powers Based On Positive Emotions: -1/4)

 

      1   Strong Protective Magic: Hardened (+1/4), Impenetrable (+1/4) and Resistant (+1/2) for up to PD +3, Limited Power (Not Against Powers Based On Positive Emotions: -1/4), Limited Power (Must Be At Large Size Or Larger To Use: -1/4)

 

      1   Strong Protective Magic: Hardened (+1/4), Impenetrable (+1/4) and Resistant (+1/2) for up to PD +3, Limited Power (Not Against Powers Based On Positive Emotions: -1/4), Limited Power (Must Be At Enormous Size Or Larger To Use: -1/4)

 

      1   Strong Protective Magic: Hardened (+1/4), Impenetrable (+1/4) and Resistant (+1/2) for up to PD +3, Limited Power (Not Against Powers Based On Positive Emotions: -1/4), Limited Power (Must Be At Huge Size Or Large To Use: -1/4)

 

      1   Strong Protective Magic: Hardened (+1/4), Impenetrable (+1/4) and Resistant (+1/2) for up to PD +3, Limited Power (Not Against Powers Based On Positive Emotions: -1/4), Limited Power (Must Be At Gigantic Size To Use [There Is No Larger Than For Her Normaly]: -1/4)

 

     18   Strong Protective Magic: Hardened (+1/4), Impenetrable (+1/4) and Resistant (+1/2) for up to ED 30, Limited Power (Not Against Powers Based On Positive Emotions: -1/4)

 

      1   Strong Protective Magic: Hardened (+1/4), Impenetrable (+1/4) and Resistant (+1/2) for up to ED +3, Limited Power (Not Against Powers Based On Positive Emotions: -1/4), Limited Power (Must Be At Large Size Or Larger To Use: -1/4)

 

      1   Strong Protective Magic: Hardened (+1/4), Impenetrable (+1/4) and Resistant (+1/2) for up to ED +3, Limited Power (Not Against Powers Based On Positive Emotions: -1/4), Limited Power (Must Be At Enormous Size Or Larger To Use: -1/4)

 

      1   Strong Protective Magic: Hardened (+1/4), Impenetrable (+1/4) and Resistant (+1/2) for up to ED +3, Limited Power (Not Against Powers Based On Positive Emotions: -1/4), Limited Power (Must Be At Huge Size Or Larger To Use: -1/4)

 

      1   Strong Protective Magic: Hardened (+1/4), Impenetrable (+1/4) and Resistant (+1/2) for up to ED +3, Limited Power (Not Against Powers Based On Positive Emotions: -1/4), Limited Power (Must Be At Gigantic Size To Use [There Is No Larger Than For Her Normaly]: -1/4)

 

    48   Strong Protective Magic: Damage Negation -6 Damage Class Physical And Energy, Limited Power (Not Against Powers Based On Positive Emotions: -1/4)

 

    96   Strong Protective Magic: Flash Defence 20, Sight, Hearing, Taist/Smell, Touch, Mental, And Mystical Sence Groups, Limited Power (Not Against Powers Based On Positive Emotions: -1/4)

 

     8   Strong Protective Magic: Knockback Defence -10m, Limited Power (Not Against Powers Based On Positive Emotions: -1/4)

 

    16  Strong Protective Magic Mental Defence 20, Limited Power (Not Against Powers Based On Positive Emotions: -1/4)

 

    16   Strong Protective Magic: Power Defence 20, Limited Power (Not Against Powers Based On Positive Emotions: -1/4)

 

    90   Dimentinal Walk: Extra-Dimensional Movement, Any Location, Any Dimention, Useable By Others (Everyone Within 10m, Must Be Willing, Recipient Controls Power, Recipicant Pays END, Grants Power To Self And Others: +1)/END Cost 9

 

    30   Mystical Floating: Flight 30m (60m NC)/END Cost 3

 

    30   Mystical Fadding: Teleportation 30m (60m NC)/END Cost 3

 

    97   Mystical Awairness: Detect Magic (Large Class Of Things), Analyze, Discriminatory, Dimentinal (any dimention), Range, Sense, Targeting, Tracking

 

    97   Emotinal Awairness: Detect Emotions (Large Class Of Things), Analyze, Discriminatory, Dimentional (any dimention), Range, Sence, Targeting, Tracking

 

    90   Vewing Through The Eye Of Darkness: Clairsetience (Sight, Hearing, Mental, and Mystical Sence Groups), Range 8X, Dimensional (any dimention), Reduce Endurance (0 END: +1/2), Physical manifestion (The Eye Of Darkness: -1/4), Blackout: -1/2), Attack Roll Requiered (-1/4), Limited Power (Can't See Into Areas Assocated With Extreme Positive Emotions: -1/4), Perceivable (The Eye Of Darkness: -1/2)/END Cost 0

 

    24   The Power Of Dark Emotional Magic: Endurance Reserve 120 END, Restricted Use (Magic Only, Not Physical: -1/4)

 

    27   The Power Of Dark Emotional Magic: Endurance Reserve 60 REC, Limited Power (Only In The Presence Of Dark Emotions Other Than What She Herself Feals: -1/2)

 

    40   Mystical Life: Life Suport (full)

 

    40   "My Servents...Listen And Obay!": Mind Link to the Court Of Hate, 4 Minds At Once, Any Range, Any Dimention, No LOS Needed

 

    63   Visions From The Eye Of Darkness: Images (Sight, Sound, Mystical, and Mental Sense Group), +5 to PRE Roll, Indirect (The Eye Of Darkness: +1/4), Inherent (+1/4) Persistant (+1/4), Reduced Endurance (0 END: +1/2), Transdimentinal (Any Dimention Where The Eye Of Darkness Currently Is: +1/2), Limited Power (Can't Use If Using Growth: -1/2), Physical manification (The Eye Of Darkness: -1/4)/END Cost 0

 

Total Power Cost: 1973

Total Power + Char Cost: 2327

 

Cost   Perks

   10    Upsurter Of Terroka: "Head Of State" (Queen Of Terroka, An Extradimentinal Land)

 

Cost   Tallents

     3   Absolute Range Sence

     3   Absolute Time Sence

     3   Bump Of Direction

     5   Eidetic Memory

     2   Off-Hand Defence

     6   She Is Beutiful...: Striking Apperance, +2/+2d6 "beutiful"

     6   ...But It Is A Terrable Beutie: Striking Apperance, +2/+2d6 "frighting"

    30  Can Speek To All: Universal Translater +10 to Roll

 

Total Perks And Talents: 68

 

Cost   Skill:Roll

     3    Expert (Magic)

     6    Analyze Magic: 16-

     4    KS: The Magical World: 16-

     4    KS: Godstones: 16-

     4    AK: Magical Dimentions: 16-

     6    Power: Dark Emotional Magic (INT Based): 16-

 

     3    Expert (Dimentinal Ruler)

     3    Bribery: 16-

     3    Bureaucratics: 16-

     3    Charm: 16-

     3    High Society: 16-

     3    Interrogation: 16-

     4    KS: Dimentinal Beings Of Note: 16-

 

     7    Analyze Emotions: 16-

     3    Breakfall: 14-

     3    Overhearing: Bugging: 14-

     3    Concealment: 14-

     3    Deduction:14-

    10   Defense Maneuver (1-4)

    10   Defensive Attack

      3   Demolition: 14- 

    15   Movement Skill Levels (All Movements, 5 Levels)

      3   Navigation: 14-

      3   Stealth: 14-

      3   Survival: 14-

      3   Tactics: 14-

 

Total Skills Cost: 118

Grand Total: 2523

 

Points   Complications (400+)

       15  Dependence: On Being Near Dark Emotions Other Than Her Own (Very Common, +3d6, Powers Gaine A 11- Required Roll, Per Day)

       10  Distinctive Features: Royal Berring (Concelable, Noted And Recognizable)

       15  Distinctive Features: Strong Aura Of Dark Emotional Magic (Not Concelable, Cause Extreme Reaction, Detectable By Detect Magic/Emotions Power, And Other Means Devised By The Game Master Running The Charater)

       20  Enraged: When What She Wants Is Denied To Her (Common, 11-, 11-)

       10  Negitive Reputation: Evil Dimentinal Queen (Frenquently, Extreme Reputation, Known Only To Mages And Mystics)

       20  Physical Complication: Unfamiler With Any Culture Other Than Her Own (All The Time, Slightly)

       20  Psychological Complication: "Glutten" For Feeding Upon Dark Emotions (Common, Total)

       20  Psychological Complication: Self Centered (Common, Total)

       15  Psychological Complication: Killer, Usaly To People She Has No Use For At The Time, Is Mad At, Or To Send Someone Else Into Giving Her The Dark Emotions She Needs (Common, Strong)

         0  Psychological Complication: Hunting Lady Heart (Common, Strong...made into 0 points cause she already has 75 points in Psy Com already)

       20  Susceptiblity: Gestures Of Light Emotions (Hugging, Kissing, Ect, Ect...) (Common, 3d6 Damage, Must Be Within 8m For It To Affect Her)

       20  Vulnerability: Powers Based On Light Emotions (2X STUN, Group Of Uncommon Attacks)

       20  Vulnerability: Powers Based On Light Emotions (2X BODY, Group Of Uncommon Attacks)

       20  Vulnerability: Powers Based On Light Emotions (2X Effect, Group Of Uncommon Attacks)

   1893  Experence Points

[steriaca]

Instead of adding new pages for the vareous boxes infomation, I'm going to repurpus by edit some old post.

 

Movement Box For Queen Nightmara.

Running: 12m (24m NC)

                At 30 points Growth, 24m (48m NC)

                At 60 points Growth, 36m (72m NC)

                At 90 points Growth, 54m (108m NC)

Leaping: 4m (8m NC)

Swimming: 4m (8m NC)

Flight: 30m (60m NC)

Teleportation: 30m (60m NC)

Extra-Dimentional Movement: Any Location, Any Dimention, Usable By Others (see main writeup)

[PhantomGM2602]

WHOOOOOOO! Sheer Terror up the Yin /Yang maximum!!

I'm thinking of sending you a 6e cs that happens to be fillable. Want me to put it here or email you the sheet?

BTW Court Of Dreams is back at HERO CENTRAL join in with LH why don't U?

[steriaca]

Curently, my home life is not so happy, with my mother dieing and all. So it'll take more time till I can return to this charater.

[bubba smith]

i'm sorry to hear of your loss

[steriaca]

Thank you Bubba, and anyone else for your suport. I dedicate this writeup to her.

 

Not because she was an evil queen or anything...gee, my foot taist good.

[bubba smith]

you're welcome

I have said the wrong thing more often than I care to admit

[steriaca]

Again, an edit of an old post to do her Defences Box. Enjoy.

 

Defences Box of Queen Nightmara.

Physical Defences: 30 PD, 30 rPD, Hardened, Impenetrable, Resistant

                                At Large size, 33 PD, 33 rPD, Hardened, Impenetrable, Resistant

                                At Enormous size, 36 PD, 36 rPD, Hardened, Impenetrable, Resistant

                                At Huge size, 39 PD, 39 rPD, Hardened, Impenetrable, Resistant

                                At Gigantic size, 42 PD, 42 rPD, Hardened, Impenetrable, Resistant

Physical Damage Negation: -6 Damage Classes

Energy Defences: 30 ED, 30 rED, Hardened, Impenetrable, Resistant

                              At Large Size, 33 ED, 33 rED, Hardened, Impenetrable, Resistant

                              At Enormous Size, 36 ED, 36 rED, Hardened, Impenetrable, Resistant

                              At Huge Size, 39 ED, 39 rED, Hardened, Impenetrable, Resistant

                              At Gigantic Size, 42 ED, 42 rED, Hardened, Impenetrable, Resistant

Energy Damage Negation: -6 Damage Classes

Mental Defences: 20 MD

Power Defences: 20 PD

Flash Defences: 20 FD, Sight, Hearing, Taist/Smell, Touch, Mental and Mystical Sence Groups protected

Knockback Resistance: -10m

                                      At Large size, -16m

                                      At Enormous size, -22m

                                      At Huge size, -28m

                                      At Gigantic size, -34m

[steriaca]

Finaly, her size box. Enjoy.

 

                 Large     Enormous     Huge     Gigantic

Height       4m          8m                14m      30m

Width         1.8m      3.8m              6m       15m

Mass         700kg     5000kg         40000kg 300000kg

STR          28           43                 58          73

CON         28           33                  38         43

PRE          35          40                  45          50

PD            33           36                  39         42

ED            33           36                  39          42

BODY       23           26                  29         32

STUN        66          72                  78          84

Reach       2m          4m                8m          16m

Run           24m        26m              48m        60m

-KB           -16m       -22m              -28m      -24m

Notes:       1             1,2                1,2,3       1,2,4

 

Notes Explnation:

1) Can't Use "Blast From The Eye Of Darkness" naked advantage in this size.

2) Gains all her Area Of Effect naked advantages for her Energy Blasts and Ranged killing Attacks at this point.

3) Gains an Area Of Effect (1m Radius) to her Strength at this point.

4) Gains an Area Of Effect (2m Radius) to her Strength at this point.

[steriaca]

Background/History: It was so long ago. But Queen Nightmara remembered it as if it was yesterday. The great battle against the dimentinal beast which eats Godstones. All her friends fell, and all she could do was to run away before she became the next meal for the beast.

 

It was in running away where she met Monsterin, a former demon mage now fused into his cloak and staff and imprisoned in the deepest, darkest cave. Afraid and powerless, she freed Monsterin from it's prison. And in exchange for the kindness, Monsterin showed her a greater power, one which she could only access by breaking her own Godstone and reshaping it into the Eye of Darkness.

 

Returning to the place where her fellow dimentinal guardians fell, she destroyed the beast easly (as it dismissed her cause he could no longer sence she had a Godstone, and this, not food for it). Then, she turned against her own people, who ridiculed her for running away from the beast. Because her new power involved feeding upon dark emotions, and the more dark emotions there are around her, the more powerful she became, nobody in her home dimention could stop her. Even Monsterin bowed down to her (well, he was more of a toady than a master of dark forces anyways...if is just that he needed to find a worthy mistress for him to follow).

 

After destroying the population of her own dimention, she and Monsterin left it and moved on to the next dimention...and the next...and the next...till she arived at her curent dimention of Teroka. Killing and reserecting four of the five guardians (The Court Of Teroka), she feed upon the population while Lady Heart sacrificed her Godstone to keep hope alive in Teroka, by finding a sutible host on Earth.

 

Recently Queen Nightmara's servents tracked the lost Godstone to Earth. And the protental for dark emotions caused the dark queen to lick her lips in anticipation. If it wasen't for thoes pesky guardians, both magical and normal superpowered...

[steriaca]

Personality/Modivation: Her only concern is for the next meal. She will do anything, say anything, to enjoy another's dark emotions and feast upon it. She cares for nothing else.

 

She pretends to be a noble ruler, but is far from it. She is hated and feared by most of her subjects. She kills a sentient as easly as you and I squish a bug. If it fules the hate or fear she feeds upon, then so be it.

 

She perfers to let her agents/Nightmarans (monsters which were originaly unliving objects transformed Sailor Moon style into creachers) do her work for her, as she is (in her mind) to important to handel directly any task but to feed. Also, the curent levels of Light Emotions on Earth pervents her from physicaly being in that dimention for long (this is a plot device, as opose to a limitation/complication). Once her agents 'seasion' the dimention enougth with sorrow and suffering, she can stand upon it for a long time and start feeding. Once that happens, she fill make one final 'pig out' in Teroka and leave it for rulling Earth.

 

Her atention on Earth is twofold. One, it contains enougth sentiant beings to make a flaverful psychic dish for herself, once it is 'seasioned' enougth. Second, that is where the original Godstone of the last guardian of Teroka, Lady Heart, went to. She is awair that there is a new Lady Heart, and she wants that Godstone for her own (to transform it to become Lady Hate).

 

Once on Earth as it's ruller, she will feed upon it till she is more than full, then seek another dimention with huge protental of dark emotions in it. And this begins the cycle again, as it has in the past. Cause missery and suffering till the population does not recover, then leave it for other dimentions to feed upon.

[steriaca]

Quotestorm:

 

"What are we in the mood for, the anger of a child who loses there mother, or the sadness of a mother who loses a child?"

 

"You have failed us. And you know we don't give out mercy."

 

"How delishous your hopelessness is to us."

 

"Love and compashion. How distaistful...take them away before we lose our lunch."

 

"As punishment for failer, you shall die, be reserected, and die again till we get board or full of your pain."

 

"We are your new queen. Look upon us and dispair."

[steriaca]

Powers/Tactics: Queen Nightmara can feed off of negitive emotions to increse her magical might. She can manipulate and read emotions, shoot beams of emotions which can wrap around targets, drain thier energys, and even harm or kill outright. She can reserect the dead, but only in targets which whom she had killed in the first place, and only if she poseses their Godstone. She can also corupt the Godstones of others.

 

One of her more mighty of powers is to absorb the surounding dark emotional energys around her to grow into a gigantic size.

 

Also, she has control over her own shatered Godstone (now refered to as the Eye Of Darkness), enabling her to view into other dimentions, send her image and voice into other dimentions (Image), and even to shoot destructed emotinal beams into that other dimention (the nakid Transdimentinal advantage).

 

Tacticly, she perfers to have her minions do the dirty work while she waits and watches. That dosen't mean she is a pushover in combat. Far from it. It is just that everyone is beneath her. Woe to the hero who gords her into fighting by calling her week and lazy.

 

Weeknesses: Queen Nightmara has one big weekness...powers based on positive emotions hurt her. Even gesters of good emotions hurt her (like kissing and hugging). Note: theas gesters need to have real emotion in them to work. Hugging in frount of her will only hurt her if both parties feal positive emotions to each other.

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Campain Use: Queen Nightmara is ment to be one of thoes big badies you see at the end of vareous superhero magical girl anime and manga. Scary, powerful, but also with a big akilies heal the size of a mac truck. When your heros finaly encounter her, it singles an end to a major story ark or campain. This, she and her henchmen should not be used casualy.

 

It is posable to redeam Queen Nightmara. In order to do so, one has to go through an epic quest to find enougth shards of her old Godstone which is not part of the Eye Of Darkness, purge the darkness from them, and reintergate the pieces to the Eye Of Darkness. Not an easy task (in fact, it is much like the journy to Mount Doom to toss the One Ring into the lava).

 

She is not ment to be more powerful. To weeken her, just reduce and/or remove some of her powers till she feals like the heros can bairly handle her. Do not touch her "Back For More Suffering" and "Corupt Godstone" powers, since they are their as physical manifications of plot devices.

 

Queen Nightmara will hunt foes who best her servents. Mostly with other servents, as acualy appearing in frount of lessers is beneath her. Mostly, her agents will try to mess around with the target's joyful emotions. But piss the queen enougth, and the servents will not hesitate to kidnap the target and take them back to Teroka so the queen can enjoy the charater's demise herself.

 

Apperance: Queen Nightmara is both beutiful and scary at the same time, with white skin, black eyes, long to the floor black hair. She wears regal clothing at all times in somber colors. She keeps her fingernails long. When she uses her growth power, her clothing also expands.

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Power Breakdown:

 

"Back For More Suffering": This is a limited healing/reserection power, based on the queen getting the target's Godstone. Since not all magical girl charaters use Godstones, this is not always doable. This is a plot device power (asume it always works on the target).

 

Corupt Godstone: The main plot device power which turns good magical girls to evil, asuming that they use Godstones as a power source. The requierments are that Queen Nightmara kills the target, then gets the Godstone (which is the only thing left after she kills the target). Then she uses "Back For More Suffering" on the target, then this three stage Transformation power. It is capable of warping bodys, if it can repersent a dark emotion (for example, Lady Lie gains another mouth, on the back of her head, and extendable tounge, while Lady Greed gains a hidden third arm).

 

The Terrable Magic Of Dark Emotions: Basicly her workhourse powers, not only do they cover blasts of pure dark emotions, but also mind control and telepathy also (othoe limited in both). Most (but not all) powers in the multipower can be incresed in the right enviroment (only slot 1, an Aid, and slot 5, an Entangle, have no boost). 

 

Sometimes Bigger Is Better/Her Physical Size Is Inverse To The Size Of Her Heart/Huge Hands: Inspiered by the final battle between Sailor Moon and a Metalica posessed Queen Berly, Queen Nightmara can grow to extreme hights depending on the level of dark emotions in the area she is at. This even modifies her energy attacks (Sometimes Bigger Is Better).

 

Strong Protective Magic: She would be a fool to go out without haveing magic modifie her defences. Unforcently for her, she is defensless to magic based on positive emotions.

 

Dimentinal Walk, Mystical Floating, Mystical Fadding: Typical movement magic for someone of her class.

 

Mystical Awairness, Emotinal Awairness: Again, imagien someone of her caliber unable to sence magic, let alone emotions.

 

The Eye Of Darkness (Vewing Through The Eye Of Darkness, Blasts From The Eye Of Darkness, Visions From The Eye Of Darkness): The Eye Of Darkness, which is in reality pieces of her shatered Godstone, alowes her to see what is hapening on other dimentions, punish her servents who fail her while they are in another dimention, and even project her image and voice to the beings of that other dimention. In other words, abilities a mystical threat should have.

 

The Power Of Dark Emotions: Basicly, energy from being around dark emotions.

 

Life Of A Major Mystical Being: What mystical force would be complete without Life Suport?

 

Linking With Her Servents: She needs not send the Eye Of Darkness to contact The Court Of Hate.

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Campain Knowlage Check: Basicly, only KS: The Mystic World would give any knowlage of Queen Nightmara.

 

No Roll: No Information, unless the GM says otherwise (and then only to say that yes, she exists).

 

Exacte: Queen Nightmara is a mystical being which has ruled many a dimention throuout time. It is said that she feeds on negitive emotions.

 

+2: She has vareous servents. Her monsters are called Nightmarieans. Her major domo is a being known only by the name Monsterin.

 

+4: She can corupt good magical girl. She is curently served by four coroupted magical girls, named the Court Of Hate.

 

+6: She can only corupt a source of magic called a Godstone.

 

+8: She can turn into a giant, if conditions are right.

 

+10: Her weakness is powers based on positive emotions. Also, gesters of positive emotions done in frount of her hurt her.

[steriaca]

Updated. Added quotes. Enjoy.

[steriaca]

Finaly got to her Powers, Tactics, and Weeknesses.

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Final update...gave her the Campain Use, Apperance, and Power Breakdown section. And her roll check list.

[Stanley Teriaca]

Been wondering what people think about this writeup. What do you think?

[Mark Rand]

Impressive.

[Stanley Teriaca]

Thank you.

 

But I didn't want a commentary from you but from others. And I wrote her a long time ago.

 

And forgive me for being slightly flippant, but you and PhantomGM2602 are a bit too close to this villain to be objective. Also, I would love to hear from others on what they would do differently, how I could (assuming I was the GM) mod her for a non-magical girl style campainge, etc.

 

I would also like @DShomshak's opinion on the character, as he has a magical girl in his current Advent Guard campaign.

Edited May 28 by Stanley Teriaca

[DShomshak]

I'll try to take a look at the character soon, but I'm a bit busy (and frazzled) right now, trying to arrange hospice care for my mother. So it might be a few days.

 

It would be wonderful to receive a writeup for Queen Nocturna, as I still haven't written up the Big Bad foe of my campaign's magical girl PC. Her two children/chief lieutenants Prince Balthazat Blackheart and Princess Shadira, yes; but not Nocturna herself.

 

Dean Shomshak

[Stanley Teriaca]

5 minutes ago, DShomshak said:

I'll try to take a look at the character soon, but I'm a bit busy (and frazzled) right now, trying to arrange hospice care for my mother. So it might be a few days.

I understand. I will probably never face this myself (except for myself), but I understand.

5 minutes ago, DShomshak said:

 

It would be wonderful to receive a writeup for Queen Nocturna, as I still haven't written up the Big Bad foe of my campaign's magical girl PC. Her two children/chief lieutenants Prince Balthazat Blackheart and Princess Shadira, yes; but not Nocturna herself.

 

Dean Shomshak

You can always adapt portions of my writeup for your use.

[DShomshak]

I like this character a lot.

 

The writeup is long, but not as complicated as it first seems. Queen Nightmara has a pretty focused set of Powers, it's just that how much of them she can use (especially the Growth) varies by surroundings and circumstance, which leads to a lot of bookkeeping in the writeup. In practice, one would likely keep character sheets for each level of Growth and shuffle between them as needed.

 

No VPP to paper over gaps in writeup! VPPs, now *those* get complicated when you actually sit at the gaming table.

 

A surprising amount of world-building implicit in the writeup itself. Like, this is a setting where magical girls have powers/identities based on emotions; and each has a Godstone that is in some way connected to their powers and their lives.

 

I'm impressed. I will not be porting Queen Nightmara whole into my campaign as Queen Nocturna, the big bad enemy for Princess Moonray, but I am learning from the character and writeup. Well done, and thank you.

 

Dean Shomshak