Re: Knightshift Stories -- Campaign Log
I like this a lot! Very interesting, very evocative.
However (excuse me whilst I critique), the jump from past tense to present is a bad idea. All the events described in present tense are "done deals"; they should be in the past tense, just like the rest.
I am sorry is you find this picky, but I was jarred, badly, by that sudden and (IMHO) unnecessary jump in tenses. I think it would be extremely improved if the penultimate paragraph were changed to past tense.
Other than that, one of the best character backgrounds I've ever seen.