Re: Practice
Yey another Chance to Nip Pick on a Character by Khelendros ()
Well here is a take I would have don on your character with some reservation to it, mainly the Focus limitation doesn't seem very appropriate here (unless the possibility to remove it is not an extreme effort) remember that Inaccessible does not mean irremovable it just means hard to remove in a combat situation (Like a ring or a set of armor) also the Obvious part does not mean its an obvious object it means that it's obvious that the focus is the source of the power used,so I only let it be obvious when you use your more flashy abilities.
All in all this is a slightly different character and also I left 15 points of disadvantages so you can pick some campaign specific ones like Hunted and such.
EDIT: LOL I forgot to actually post the Character file for your observation