Might be getting back into actually playing again and would like some help.
Here is a write up for my character. Basically he is one of the foremost (if not THE foremost) physicists of his generation (he thinks of all time!). If anyone watches Stargate: Atlantis, think Rodney but less of a fearful wimp.
Basic origin is he was the lead physicist working on a new super collider working on generating mini big-bangs/blackholes to delve the secrets of the universe. An experiment was interrupted by a villian/group/organization (they wanted to make a point singularity weapon), he was bombarded by some of the new particles created by the collider and Wallah! He gained the ability to emit and control graviton particles around his body. This transformation enhanced his physical attributes as well. Think of a nice heavy-g world.
What do I need help with? I am not a very good writer.
I need help with a well written background/history write up, origin, some personality/motivation write-ups, the whole schmoo! I've seen the character write ups here and I know there are more talented folks here than me!
Also any suggestions on possible changes to the character. I have not gamed with these folks for quite some time, but the character is on the max side of defense/attack limits.
Thanks in advance!