Re: Please Review: Outsider
For me it's always the skills and perks that define the character.
With this one I'd question the viability or applicability of the Disguise 12- ability when you've got 2 sets of Distinctive features in the Disads. Likewise the Teamwork skill when her quote is "Bow down and surrender" and she has all this mind control ability. Maybe it ties into her "normal" personality, but it seems forced.
Several of the other skills again seemed forced, The Charm skill when she has a PRE of 45? Likewise why the Bureacratics of 18- (yes, it's a form E3445J initialed on pages 4, 17 and 35 but signed on pages 6 and 11, copies to the PPS, APPS and JAPPS within 3 days of permit issue) when she can just order something done? And the rest overlap in many areas...
The powers build themselves are amazing. Munchkin but amazing, and deserving Kudo's.