BoloOfEarth Posted January 22, 2016 Report Share Posted January 22, 2016 Make sure you remove the apostrophe from "it's". The possessive form is "its". The way you have it means "it is". Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tiger Posted January 22, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2016 Make sure you remove the apostrophe from "it's". The possessive form is "its". The way you have it means "it is". tis true Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tiger Posted January 22, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2016 Make sure you remove the apostrophe from "it's". The possessive form is "its". The way you have it means "it is". Here you are my friend and a better size for viewing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steriaca Posted January 22, 2016 Report Share Posted January 22, 2016 Good artwork sofar. Beyond the sloberknocker fight between Terror Incorporated and Eurostar, I would like to see... 1 ) A full look at Murute's goles, plans, and insanity (my guess, the bad professor is an extreme bipolar condition). 2 ) An indep view of the bad professor's agents. What does Esprita get out of thus? Pointguard? Gigante? The average TI agent? 3 ) An indep review of the day to day life of the average citican of San Murtue. What do they know about there leader? What do they fear about him? How do they cope? 4 ) The ministers of San Murtue. Who controls the media there? How? Who gets full, truthful information? Who only gets lies. 5 ) How are agents of Terror Incorporated recruited? How many of them are citizens? How many are from the hispanic criminal underworld? How many are from the mercenary world? The military world? 6 ) Who exactly can the group 'trust' in the Supervillain world? How is Murtue's relationship with a certain Doctor? Beyond Eurostar, who are there enemies? Who are there frenemies? 7 ) What does the world knows about TI? Does the team want to keep there return a secret? If so, for how long? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tiger Posted January 22, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2016 Good artwork sofar. 3 ) An indep review of the day to day life of the average citican of San Murtue. What do they know about there leader? What do they fear about him? How do they cope? 4 ) The ministers of San Murtue. Who controls the media there? How? Who gets full, truthful information? Who only gets lies. Still tweaking the character art a bit, but happy with most of it so far The product takes off at the point Muerte enters the water. So everyone believes he's dead at this point. So doubt that there will be much meddling in South America. But one can never tell Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoloOfEarth Posted January 22, 2016 Report Share Posted January 22, 2016 The product takes off at the point Muerte enters the water. So everyone believes he's dead at this point. So doubt that there will be much meddling in South America. But one can never tell Then maybe some info on what happened to San Muerte after he "died" (celebrations? mourning? did someone take over?), and if he plans to do anything there after his return (vengeance against traitors? retake it? ignore it?). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoloOfEarth Posted January 22, 2016 Report Share Posted January 22, 2016 And thank you for fixing that on the possible cover (which looks good, by the way). I know it's a minor thing, but things like that (especially on a product's cover) can get under my skin. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steriaca Posted January 22, 2016 Report Share Posted January 22, 2016 Then maybe some info on what happened to San Muerte after he "died" (celebrations? mourning? did someone take over?), and if he plans to do anything there after his return (vengeance against traitors? retake it? ignore it?). My take on it was a junta took over, keeping the 'fact' of Muerte's death a secret. So, since the island's name is in the name of the supplement, we should have an ideal about the state of the island and the people of the island. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tiger Posted January 22, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2016 And thank you for fixing that on the possible cover (which looks good, by the way). I know it's a minor thing, but things like that (especially on a product's cover) can get under my skin. No problem, I'm pretty excited about this project, but have got to stop making images on 3 hours sleep Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steriaca Posted January 22, 2016 Report Share Posted January 22, 2016 No problem, I'm pretty excited about this project, but have got to stop making images on 3 hours sleep Go get some rest. We will mind the thread till you get back. Your benevolent dictator commands it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tiger Posted January 23, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2016 Another cover concept, might be too busy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tiger Posted January 23, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 23, 2016 still playing with the cover Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoloOfEarth Posted January 23, 2016 Report Share Posted January 23, 2016 It's less busy than the first one (which honestly seems more like a back cover than a front cover). Much better with the apocalyptic background. Personally, I'd use a slightly smaller font for callouts to Steve Perrin and Heroic Publishing (and shrink the logo for Heroic Publishing to match). Preferably combined them at the bottom (From the creations of Steve Perrin and the comics of Heroic Publishing). Should be "Rated M for Muerte." Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheQuestionMan Posted January 24, 2016 Report Share Posted January 24, 2016 Day of Dead https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Day_of_the_Dead Santa Muerte https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Santa_Muerte Latin American Culture https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Latin_American_culture South American Culture https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Culture_of_South_America Professor Muerte - Wikipedia http://championsonline.wikia.com/wiki/Professor_Muerte Professor Muerte - Comicvine http://www.comicvine.com/professor-muerte/4005-1831/ Professor Muerte - RPGNet http://wiki.rpg.net/index.php/Professor_Muerte Marvel's Hispanic Superheroes and Supervillains http://www.comicvine.com/profile/azrael11/lists/marvel-s-hispanic-superheroes-and-supervillains/48236/ DC's Hispanic Superheroes and Supervillains http://www.comicvine.com/profile/azrael11/lists/dc-s-hispanic-superheroes-and-supervillains/48225/ Latin American Folklore https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Category:Latin_American_folklore South American Folklore https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Category:South_American_mythology Megalomania https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Megalomania Black Witch https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ascalapha_odorata Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheQuestionMan Posted January 24, 2016 Report Share Posted January 24, 2016 South American Comics https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Category:South_American_comics Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheQuestionMan Posted January 24, 2016 Report Share Posted January 24, 2016 Terror Incorporated - How is it organized. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steriaca Posted January 24, 2016 Report Share Posted January 24, 2016 QMan goes a bit overboard with the links, but they should give you an ideal or two of the research needed to do this "right". Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheQuestionMan Posted January 24, 2016 Report Share Posted January 24, 2016 Sorry over enthusiatic Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tiger Posted January 24, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2016 Sorry over enthusiatic No Problem Q, found some of them very useful Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tiger Posted January 24, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2016 New look for Muerte, closer to the half death mask from the comics of Heroic Publishing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wcw43921 Posted January 24, 2016 Report Share Posted January 24, 2016 I would keep the fangs, I think. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tiger Posted January 24, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2016 I would keep the fangs, I think. Like to but not an option, image still a work in progress though Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tiger Posted January 24, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2016 I would keep the fangs, I think. More like this Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tiger Posted January 26, 2016 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2016 3 ) An indep review of the day to day life of the average citican of San Murtue. What do they know about there leader? What do they fear about him? How do they cope? 4 ) The ministers of San Murtue. Who controls the media there? How? Who gets full, truthful information? Who only gets lies. Which book is this from? I am unaware of it. Most of what I've done with Muerte was my own creation more than Hero Games. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steriaca Posted January 26, 2016 Report Share Posted January 26, 2016 Which book is this from? I am unaware of it. Most of what I've done with Muerte was my own creation more than Hero Games. That is the point. Nothing has been fleshed out about San Murte, except for the name and that TI controls the island (or, more recently, officaly use to control the island). That is what your job, if you will. To fill out any facts from your mind (and, since it is unofficial, not have any offical help). Mr. Pern can help, with only what he has done with the island in his own campain. Hear is a hint: befor TI, the island was named something else. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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